Love.., strange format ? |
 Jul 20 2005, 01:03 AM
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six letters,
my baby. five meanings, my world, the smile, my laugh, tears fall, better half . four actions, quick kiss, last hug, pure bliss, silent vow, three words, all true, two people, me, you one heart, love . ------ ...2 words per line, is it a poem ? lol . 
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Jul 20 2005, 10:10 PM
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I really like this one. :) Especially with the thing you did with going from six to one...that was original. I think it's still a really good poem even with two words per line, and the whole thing flows smoothly when you read it.
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lidoxangie Love.. Jul 20 2005, 01:03 AM
yummy_delight I think it's a poem.
I actually like the form... Jul 20 2005, 02:56 PM _suzie_ aw thats sweet :P nice format btw, it suits it pe... Jul 21 2005, 11:15 AM ..:loveee.NuTTii I love the format. I wouldn't use strange, ju... Jul 21 2005, 04:30 PM
yukichan i like it..especially the format..its very origina... Jul 21 2005, 05:54 PM |
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