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lose yourself, ....my way
cookienmilkforna...
post Jul 19 2005, 02:14 AM
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who goes there?!?!?!
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Paradox of Life
post Jul 19 2005, 12:27 PM
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My name's Katt. Nice to meet you!
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Concept: 0/10
Writing Ability: 2/10
Flow: 4/10
Overall: 10/10 for laughs.

'yo, you had one chance, by yourself
to undress any female you ever wanted
would you do it or chicken out'

To undress any female you ever wanted? Um.. This is not tasteful writing. You basically took a good concept from Eminem (I know the lyrics, mind you) and turned it into something tasteless. Way to go, brother.
 

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cookienmilkfornaps   lose yourself   Jul 19 2005, 02:14 AM
basick   beautiful   Jul 19 2005, 02:18 AM
nightmare4taki   Pardon me I had to laugh at that. You not only lo...   Jul 19 2005, 03:01 AM
Statistik   That was nice.   Jul 19 2005, 10:43 AM
Paradox of Life   Concept: 0/10 Writing Ability: 2/10 Flow: 4/10 Ove...   Jul 19 2005, 12:27 PM
cookienmilkfornaps   i didnt write it for the rap skills... just for so...   Jul 19 2005, 12:38 PM
xXMomoBubbleTeaXx   I tried to rap it..cause it looks like you used th...   Jul 19 2005, 05:31 PM


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