i effing hate jockers, seriously Options

[mocassinsx29]

I Hate You
Lacking skill and moral too
They often make me feel so blue
But most of the time
They deserve Jason's 5000 fines
I can't believe my very eyes
But it's not like a big surprise
It's not the last time that they'll strike
Maybe next time, they'll steal my bike
But I never thought it'd be me
It wasn't even cool, honestly
Guess you're wondering
Whose the one blundering
It's not me, and it's not you
Yes, yes, it's you-know-who
Not Voldemort, no no no
It's the jockers, don't you know?

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Solved.

[sikdragon]

shallow at best. honestly, it was not a poem.

[mocassinsx29]

shallow at best. honestly, it was not a poem.

Thanks for the honesty, I agree it's not the deepest subject but I don't think you can say it wasn't a poem.

A verbal composition designed to convey experiences, ideas, or emotions in a vivid and imaginative way, characterized by the use of language chosen for its sound and suggestive power and by the use of literary techniques such as meter, metaphor, and rhyme.

[MrElsewhere]

Thanks for the honesty, I agree it's not the deepest subject but I don't think you can say it wasn't a poem.

don't mind him. he's known for finding the faults in things. it's like simon, cept..not as witty.

anyways. i thought it was a so so poem. not anything but you didn't nuke it. i think it could be made more fun if you used colorful words or played with how the words can be placed. something like that.