A gun control freestyle, in honor of Joshua ... R.I.P. Options

[LEGITERICJONES]

I'm a 13 year old freestyling about my friend who died from gang violence, please forgive my excessive use of the word "nigga"
and f**k, thank you. Positive feedback would be appreciated.


"Check this out who cruel this world could be leavin a nigga on the street corners// I'm tryin to live to 20, yet allone achieve honors// The BLACk government would like to see my landlord convict me// So they can see hustlin and beggin on the streets quickly //tryin to ruin a young mans life till he has nothing but dreams of a home// so he grows up by himself cold and alone// so he quickly learns to hustle and pack his heat// he dosen't want to rob people but a nigga has to eat// so watch as he tires to configure out a robbery scheme// watch as he has his headphones blarin tryin to imatiate games "dreams"//

so shit proceedes till the killer in himself escalates// he brings himself to enter his school and dominate// he raised with both hands said a silent farewell and pulled the trigger on the shotty// the horror behold no heads on the bodys// so whath appens now he's just trned a killa// he dosen't want to live no mo so he pulls the trigger// this is just another twisted version of colombine// just another product of children suplied with tec-9's//

so listen up man this is a story about a true souldja// f**k what you heard son, just concentrate on what I told ya// this was a short story about gun control// so while you sit at home at your PC people bussin at police patrols// so just think what happens to kids with no home// they loose all hope and feelings as their hearts turn to stone//this is how life in the ghetto typically be// still livin in the hood you have niggas tryin to harm me// but whatever happens remember if you get a gun think twice// before you pull the trigger and take a precious gift, your life//

[ShOrTy By NaTuR3]

WOW im amazed by your words for real..im sorry for your loss..keep your head up and do whats best for you.