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my rap, awesome-n-hot [possible dejayyy diss]
*Statistik*
post Jul 11 2005, 07:45 PM
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LEAVE CONTRUCTIVE CRITICISM OR DON'T POST AT ALL. DO NOT USE OFFENSIVE LANGUAGE IN THESE "BATTLES", WHICH INCLUDES OFFENSIVE RACIAL SLURS.

YOU ALL HAVE BEEN WARNED.

-Fae



Yo I'm just trying to prove my point//
I'm trying to make this a burning hot joint//
Y'all people can't feel my rhymes and lines//
Ask the cop why I got over 5,000 fines//
My girls got more taste on me than bud light//
All you gotta do is holla and i'll make ya tight//
I'm gonna take this shit to the hardcore extreme//
I'm like The Game because I get nightmares and dreams//
Yeah dejayyyy my name is jason..//
I'm attempting to get a trace-in//
You're freddy kreuger? oh man i'm going to get feared//
Ask all my hip-hop fans, they'll say I always get cheered//
If you wanna be freddy dejayyy, you must be afraid of fire//
Damn, That's pity no wonder you can't get any higher//
When I get retired, The Kangsta will be remembered//
So i'm gonna finish you off, i hope you get dismembered//
Yeah you are the game dejayyyy because i always play you//
First improve your freestyles bytch and I will pay you//
Yeah i'm 50 cent because I get a lot of beef//
Call me the king because I'm always the cheef//
And now one more thing dejayyy don't disrespect me//
I achieved more than you losa, I'm always connected//
Call me the hard mirror, because I'm always reflected//

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*stephinika*
post Jul 12 2005, 09:17 PM
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^^x2

because no one who could close it hasn't seen it yet...
please stop with the raps with only the point to diss one another. thanks.

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*basick*
post Jul 13 2005, 06:34 PM
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QUOTE(stephinika @ Jul 12 2005, 7:17 PM)
please stop with the raps with only the point to diss one another. thanks.
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why?
 
Paradox of Life
post Jul 13 2005, 07:00 PM
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QUOTE(basick @ Jul 13 2005, 5:34 PM)
why?
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1. It's annoying
2. It's not good
3. DJ and Jason should keep it amongst themselves
4. It's trash
5. They're stupid publicity stunts that usually draw negative feedback
6. THEY'RE CRUSHING PEOPLES' SELF-ESTEEM JOKE OR NOT.

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*brownsugar08*
post Jul 13 2005, 07:06 PM
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QUOTE(AkaRyux @ Jul 13 2005, 8:00 PM)
1. It's annoying
2. It's not good
3. DJ and Jason should keep it amongst themselves
4. It's trash
5. They're stupid publicity stunts that usually draw negative feedback
6. THEY'RE CRUSHING PEOPLES' SELF-ESTEEM JOKE OR NOT.

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Katherine, I think you're very nice and sweet, but I have to disagree with this, dear.
These are all your opinions..the topic shouldn't be closed just because a couple people think it's bashing, or crushing people's self esteems.

DJ, Jason...are your feelings hurt? Do you feel bad after you read a diss? Or do you laugh, and think of another creative and entertaining one? Creative and Entertaining. This is my opinion on the Diss Wars.

One person thinks it's stupid and annoying..another thinks it's entertaining.

Honestly..you posting here every time about how it's not good, isn't helping anything.
If you really think it sucks, then don't open the topic, read, press add reply, type your comment, and submit. It's as simple as that. wink.gif












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Paradox of Life
post Jul 13 2005, 11:38 PM
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QUOTE(brownsugar08 @ Jul 13 2005, 6:06 PM)
Katherine, I think you're very nice and sweet, but I have to disagree with this, dear.
These are all your opinions..the topic shouldn't be closed just because a couple people think it's bashing, or crushing people's self esteems.

DJ, Jason...are your feelings hurt? Do you feel bad after you read a diss? Or do you laugh, and think of another creative and entertaining one? Creative and Entertaining. This is my opinion on the Diss Wars.

One person thinks it's stupid and annoying..another thinks it's entertaining.

Honestly..you posting here every time about how it's not good, isn't helping anything.
If you really think it sucks, then don't open the topic, read, press add reply, type your comment, and submit. It's as simple as that. wink.gif
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I could choose not to read it, but I posted because I feel like posting my opinion about this crap. Okay, so you guys don't get "offended", but what if someone just didn't like someone else and decided to make a dissing rap about them? And then they could say "No! It's just for fun!" I wouldnt' want someone doing that to me. If you guys want to do it so bad, keep it to yourselves because Stephanie, Anna, Justin and I think it's stupid. Share it with the people that want to hear, but you don't have to go blabbing all this shit on the WRITING forum. Sure, the lyrical forum's a good idea. When I'm looking for good, inspirational writing, I shouldn't have to stumble across litter like this.



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J-DraGoNz
post Jul 13 2005, 11:44 PM
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QUOTE(AkaRyux @ Jul 13 2005, 9:38 PM)
I could choose not to read it, but I posted because I feel like posting my opinion about this crap.
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well then, if it bugs you so much, all you have to do is NOT read it and you won't have any opinion to really state because you never really read what was in the thread. I don't see how this really effects you negatively in any way.


QUOTE(AkaRyux @ Jul 13 2005, 9:38 PM)
Okay, so you guys don't get "offended", but what if someone just didn't like someone else and decided to make a dissing rap about them? And then they could say "No! It's just for fun!" I wouldnt' want someone doing that to me.
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if that happens you can regulate.


QUOTE(AkaRyux @ Jul 13 2005, 9:38 PM)
keep it to yourselves because Stephanie, Anna, Justin and I think it's stupid. Share it with the people that want to hear
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And atleast four of us on this board enjoy it. what's your point? this forum has 112,000+ people on it, your argument can be totally turned around in saying, "well me and dejay and jason and brownsugar enjoy it, so just dont look in the thread" unless you get a strong majority, that argument in particular really doesnt hold any water. and actually our argument is more logical because it doesnt stifle anyone from doing what they want but rather your way would hurt those who want to do this but now cant because a small few dislike it while you guys could totally avoid it easily. we'll just be sure to label our threads for you.
it may be "litter" to you but to a few of us it sure isn't anywhere near that.
 
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post Jul 14 2005, 08:21 AM
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QUOTE(J-DraGoNz @ Jul 13 2005, 9:44 PM)
well then, if it bugs you so much, all you have to do is NOT read it and you won't have any opinion to really state because you never really read what was in the thread. I don't see how this really effects you negatively in any way.
if that happens you can regulate.
And atleast four of us on this board enjoy it. what's your point? this forum has 112,000+ people on it, your argument can be totally turned around in saying, "well me and dejay and jason and brownsugar enjoy it, so just dont look in the thread" unless you get a strong majority, that argument in particular really doesnt hold any water. and actually our argument is more logical because it doesnt stifle anyone from doing what they want but rather your way would hurt those who want to do this but now cant because a small few dislike it while you guys could totally avoid it easily. we'll just be sure to label our threads for you.
it may be "litter" to you but to a few of us it sure isn't anywhere near that.
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You're bringing invalid, unworthy attention to this forum in a very invalid, unworthy manner.

What you don't seem to understand (Mr. 52 posts) is that some of us have been submitting well thought out prose/poetry in this forum for over a year.

I really don't know what your doin in your hip-hop daily//
You remind of me of that MTV Host with no penis Carson Daly//


Are you serious? This kind of nonsense can't be saved for an AIM conversation? It couldn't be done in the Forum Games section (where people couldn't spam "OHHHH DISSED!!11" and have it count for their posts)? This kind of idiocy is what is going to attract attention to this forum now?

Like I said -- if that's what we're reduced to now, I'll just f**king skip it.

And thanks, by the way. Thanks for bringing this shit in here.
 

Posts in this topic
Statistik   my rap   Jul 11 2005, 07:45 PM
wind&fire   you can drive?   Jul 11 2005, 07:46 PM
DrNick311   This is yet another example of why you need to get...   Jul 11 2005, 08:13 PM
Just Blaze   If you are interested, I am looking for new rapper...   Jul 11 2005, 08:13 PM
Hiphop d[-_-]b   omgoodness. please do NOT give the boy hope. then ...   Jul 11 2005, 10:53 PM
RockizLife   God. Help this young man boy.   Jul 11 2005, 11:09 PM
Paradox of Life   "Yo I'm just trying to prove my point// I...   Jul 11 2005, 11:10 PM
sadolakced acid   GOD. boy, get your syncapation right, your rhymes...   Jul 11 2005, 11:33 PM
lbjshaq2345   QUOTECall me the hard mirror, because I'm alwa...   Jul 11 2005, 11:40 PM
CrackedRearView   Do you have to ruin the writing forum with this dr...   Jul 12 2005, 01:30 AM
J-DraGoNz   Lol everywhere I go this kid gets nothing but hate...   Jul 12 2005, 08:49 AM
xquizit   ^ We diss him because he doesn't write his lyr...   Jul 12 2005, 01:09 PM
J-DraGoNz   QUOTE(xquizit @ Jul 12 2005, 11:09 AM)^ We di...   Jul 13 2005, 01:51 AM
L!ckitySplit   ^ ya she did i thought he said he was gonna write...   Jul 12 2005, 01:13 PM
Hiphop d[-_-]b   QUOTEBut you gotta realize that true hip hop comes...   Jul 12 2005, 01:37 PM
De112   dissing me back, eh jason?! hahaha. don't ...   Jul 12 2005, 01:41 PM
De112   FROM NOW ON, ALL THE DISSES SHALL BE POSTED IN THE...   Jul 12 2005, 01:43 PM
L!ckitySplit   lol yaaaaaay! *claps*   Jul 12 2005, 01:46 PM
beautifuls0ul_x3   DJ, everyday you seem to amaze me. <3 That shit...   Jul 12 2005, 01:47 PM
beautifuls0ul_x3   jason, honestly you went all over the place and it...   Jul 12 2005, 02:12 PM
Funky Buddha   Shit is awesome man! hahahah Jason just gets p...   Jul 12 2005, 02:34 PM
Azarel   Stop ruining the writing forum with your childish ...   Jul 12 2005, 02:37 PM
De112   QUOTE(Azarel @ Jul 12 2005, 1:37 PM)Stop ruin...   Jul 12 2005, 02:43 PM
Azarel   QUOTE(De112 @ Jul 12 2005, 12:43 PM)whoa calm...   Jul 12 2005, 02:51 PM
De112   QUOTE(Azarel @ Jul 12 2005, 1:51 PM)I really ...   Jul 12 2005, 02:53 PM
Paradox of Life   QUOTE(Azarel @ Jul 12 2005, 1:51 PM)I really ...   Jul 12 2005, 07:30 PM
basick   QUOTE(Azarel @ Jul 12 2005, 12:51 PM)I really...   Jul 12 2005, 07:49 PM
L!ckitySplit   QUOTE(Azarel @ Jul 12 2005, 3:37 PM)Stop ruin...   Jul 12 2005, 07:12 PM
not_your_average   I'll have to agree with Anna, Katt and Justin....   Jul 14 2005, 01:34 PM
basick   QUOTE(not_your_average @ Jul 14 2005, 11:34 A...   Jul 14 2005, 08:09 PM
jooleeah   That was amusing. Wow...   Jul 12 2005, 02:48 PM
nightmare4taki   That wasn't bad Jason. Just have to say this ...   Jul 12 2005, 03:00 PM
nightmare4taki   Jason try again man you just got murked in Round o...   Jul 12 2005, 03:09 PM
chaneun   DJ, guess what? All you sucker MCs got nothing on...   Jul 12 2005, 03:24 PM
De112   QUOTE(chaneun @ Jul 12 2005, 2:24 PM)DJ, gues...   Jul 12 2005, 04:35 PM
wind&fire   QUOTE(chaneun @ Jul 13 2005, 6:24 AM)DJ, gues...   Jul 12 2005, 07:03 PM
mocassinsx29   ^ Such a good sport. :) Nice rhymes, I'm sick...   Jul 12 2005, 06:52 PM
lbjshaq2345   ok how bout dj goes to entertainment cuz it is ent...   Jul 12 2005, 07:02 PM
chaneun   ^I know, I just wrote it out as a rap because I ca...   Jul 12 2005, 07:10 PM
Lo Mein   dammmnn you busted on himm   Jul 12 2005, 07:34 PM
Statistik   I really don't know what your doin in your hip...   Jul 12 2005, 08:38 PM
basick   QUOTE(Jason61992 @ Jul 12 2005, 6:38 PM)I rea...   Jul 12 2005, 08:39 PM
L!ckitySplit   QUOTE(basick @ Jul 12 2005, 9:39 PM)that was ...   Jul 12 2005, 08:43 PM
wayne   umm.... nice i guess? first line was tight.. but y...   Jul 12 2005, 08:40 PM
De112   ha, u really wanna get pwned eh?   Jul 12 2005, 08:41 PM
basick   that was awesome-n-hot.   Jul 12 2005, 08:43 PM
beautifuls0ul_x3   this may i say is the worst diss in history. QUOT...   Jul 12 2005, 09:10 PM
Fallen Fairy   pwn? fallen fairy   Jul 12 2005, 09:15 PM
Azarel   QUOTE(L!ckitySplit @ Jul 12 2005, 5:12 PM...   Jul 12 2005, 09:16 PM
L!ckitySplit   QUOTE(Azarel @ Jul 12 2005, 10:16 PM)Child, t...   Jul 13 2005, 08:38 PM
stephinika   ^^x2 because no one who could close it hasn...   Jul 12 2005, 09:17 PM
basick   QUOTE(stephinika @ Jul 12 2005, 7:17 PM)pleas...   Jul 13 2005, 06:34 PM
Paradox of Life   QUOTE(basick @ Jul 13 2005, 5:34 PM)why? 1....   Jul 13 2005, 07:00 PM
brownsugar08   QUOTE(AkaRyux @ Jul 13 2005, 8:00 PM)1. It...   Jul 13 2005, 07:06 PM
De112   QUOTE(brownsugar08 @ Jul 13 2005, 6:06 PM)Kat...   Jul 13 2005, 08:35 PM
Paradox of Life   QUOTE(brownsugar08 @ Jul 13 2005, 6:06 PM)Kat...   Jul 13 2005, 11:38 PM
J-DraGoNz   QUOTE(AkaRyux @ Jul 13 2005, 9:38 PM)I could ...   Jul 13 2005, 11:44 PM
CrackedRearView   QUOTE(J-DraGoNz @ Jul 13 2005, 9:44 PM)w...   Jul 14 2005, 08:21 AM
J-DraGoNz   QUOTE(CrackedRearView @ Jul 14 2005, 6:21 AM)...   Jul 14 2005, 04:01 PM
stephinika   QUOTEplease stop with the raps with only the point...   Jul 12 2005, 09:18 PM
wind&fire   ^cos hes an inserure 12 year old korean with no re...   Jul 13 2005, 03:34 AM
Frankie   guys, stop with the member bashing. i'm closin...   Jul 13 2005, 01:22 PM
kryogenix   http://www.createblog.com/forums/index.php...1...   Jul 13 2005, 02:46 PM
J-DraGoNz   dejay that was pretty dope   Jul 13 2005, 02:47 PM
De112   so...what...it's...opened...again? so can i co...   Jul 13 2005, 04:56 PM
J-DraGoNz   I hope I didn't start a bunch of like...hatred...   Jul 13 2005, 09:29 PM
Hiphop d[-_-]b   QUOTESick of what? Is not clicking a topic that ha...   Jul 15 2005, 01:45 AM
HoodieObsessed   hey, I think you guys are being a little harsh. G...   Jul 15 2005, 03:01 AM
xquizit   QUOTE(HoodieObsessed @ Jul 15 2005, 3:01 AM)H...   Jul 18 2005, 01:19 PM


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