Poems for all the CB writers |
 Apr 29 2004, 07:23 PM
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<--asdoua hfkawhekf  Group: Member Posts: 40 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 10,373  |
For the poet in us all. Dunno if this is the right place for the thread, but here ya go. Feel free to post your poetry... And be open to criticism (hopefully constructive!). Here's one of mine...
Hope you like it. And give some cc plz...Ty Moral Anaesthesia We were always barred behind each other's private walls; with miles of air and oceanic mass, words unspoken behind bullet-proof glass. Helpless and stuck in a mere illusion, a fleeting moment past much too soon; the promise of God to a fool, beauty too pure to ever be true. I bite my lip as I kiss you goodbye, try to look away when my love flies by. I bite my lip and repeat the old lie, try to look away 'cause boys don't cry. Tonight you tore down all dreams built with white lies and deceit. Where I once stood comfortably numb, I weep and rot deaf, blind and dumb; Feast in misery like cheap red wine, the easiest substitute for the truth. Moral anaesthesia, morphine for the soul - the price you pay, for losing control. I bite my lip as I kiss you goodbye, try to look away when my love flies by. I bite my lip and repeat the old lie, try to look away 'cause boys don't cry. |
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Apr 29 2004, 11:09 PM
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cb=bullshit. Group: Member Posts: 1,783 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,793 |
i posted one of mine before.. it got lost somewhere... i'll go look for it..
this was the first one i ever wrote... it's confusing to some people... but hey, i understand what i'm saying. found it: Why do you choke me so? kill me already I can't hold onto your mocking pain... watch me suck on your open wounds... devouring all your dreams along with your heart with what it feels... I'll stare at you while you search into your eyes... you touch your hand... amazing how you do it with just one... and I make an attempt to wipe away your tears... but I cant... because they'll stay forever... until I wipe away my own... and at that moment yours will disappear... and I'll shatter you with my fist and then all of our past will be gone.... I'll shed one tear... and you wont even exist while it's there.... I'll dry it away... and move on. |
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AzN_AssAul'][' Poems for all the CB writers Apr 29 2004, 07:23 PM
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