"Rest In Peace" - 12/15/2004, My latest poem..still kind of old though |
"Rest In Peace" - 12/15/2004, My latest poem..still kind of old though |
Jul 12 2005, 08:54 AM
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This was the latest poem I've written (it's been a long while since I've written any poetry) but I wrote this on December 15th 2004. It's about a close friend of mine who was murdered the previous day. Drop ya thoughts. Thanks for readin'. One.
A young, beautiful girl; just at the age of fifteen, With so much potential to do so many great things, A girl so sweet with many ambitions and dreams, But struck down at her peak; a disaster unseen, How can this be? I still can't believe, That something so tragic would happen to someone so sweet, I miss you terribly, I know everybody does, You were more than a great friend; an Angel sent from above, It's hard to imagine life without your presence, You were more than a part of mine; you were the essence, I cried so much when I first heard the news, It was a shock to me; I was so confused, I refused to believe it; I remember the day clearly, It was early in the morning; half past three, Fearfully knowing the truth; I called you and texted you, Then cried again while imagining the pain that you went through, That same day, I stopped by your house around six A.M., I sat still in my car, not even daring to look in, I sat there in sadness; knowing I'd never see you again, It tore me inside knowing that I had lost a close friend, I remember when we used to talk on the phone all night, I remember looking with you in the sky for stars shining bright, I remember the way you made me laugh and your beautiful smile, I remember thinking how spending time with you was so worthwhile, I will remember the things that you taught me forever, And I will never forget the times that we spent together, I miss you dearly, and I always will, But now I realize that you are here still, Because even though you're gone, we will never be apart, For you will reside forever within my heart. [I]Rest in Peace Jennifer. |
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Jul 12 2005, 11:01 AM
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J-DraGoNz "Rest In Peace" - 12/15/2004 Jul 12 2005, 08:54 AM
broken_lance l'm sorry about what happened to your friend.
... Jul 12 2005, 09:33 AM
J-DraGoNz QUOTE(lidoxangie @ Jul 12 2005, 9:01 AM)rip j... Jul 12 2005, 11:06 AM
Biblesterr743 wow... some deep stuff!!
God bless Jul 12 2005, 11:04 AM
lidoxangie QUOTEAh, How interesting that I should find someon... Jul 12 2005, 11:12 AM
J-DraGoNz QUOTE(lidoxangie @ Jul 12 2005, 9:12 AM)mm...... Jul 12 2005, 11:18 AM
lidoxangie --------- Jul 12 2005, 11:19 AM
J-DraGoNz That day, I was driving home on the 405. I had pla... Jul 12 2005, 11:22 AM
lidoxangie --------- Jul 12 2005, 12:29 PM
jooleeah I'm so sorry. Very nice writing, though. Almo... Jul 13 2005, 04:18 PM
Paradox of Life That was very well written. So emotional. I'm ... Jul 13 2005, 07:06 PM![]() ![]() |