Poems for all the CB writers Options

[AzN_AssAul'][']

For the poet in us all. Dunno if this is the right place for the thread, but here ya go. Feel free to post your poetry... And be open to criticism (hopefully constructive!). Here's one of mine...
Hope you like it. And give some cc plz...Ty

Moral Anaesthesia

We were always barred behind
each other's private walls;
with miles of air and oceanic mass,
words unspoken behind bullet-proof glass.
Helpless and stuck in a mere illusion,
a fleeting moment past much too soon;
the promise of God to a fool,
beauty too pure to ever be true.

I bite my lip as
I kiss you goodbye,
try to look away when
my love flies by.

I bite my lip and
repeat the old lie,
try to look away 'cause
boys
don't
cry.

Tonight you tore down all dreams
built with white lies and deceit.
Where I once stood comfortably numb,
I weep and rot deaf, blind and dumb;
Feast in misery like cheap red wine,
the easiest substitute for the truth.
Moral anaesthesia, morphine for the soul -
the price you pay, for losing control.

I bite my lip as
I kiss you goodbye,
try to look away when
my love flies by.

I bite my lip and
repeat the old lie,
try to look away 'cause
boys
don't
cry.

[*mer*]

this is really old. its kind of a song i made up but never finished

theres somebody, out there for me,
just let me open, my eyes to see.
all the beauty that u possess,
all my feelings i have to express.

my inspirations come from ur beauty,
no words can explain, just what u are.
ur so appealing, both inside and out,
thats why im feelin u without any doubt.

girl u got me, straight to my heart,
girl i felt u, right from the start.
u intrigued me, with ur lifestyle,
i get so ecstatic, wenever you'd smile.

how did u ever, get to my weakness,
something about you, ur just so amazing.
all about you, about your uniqueness,
got me feeling, feeling amazing.

all this time, ill be waiting for you,
ill keep on waiting, if this feeling's true.
my only prayer, is for you to be glad,
ill wipe the tears, wenever ur sad.