my rap, awesome-n-hot [possible dejayyy diss] |
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 Jul 11 2005, 07:45 PM
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LEAVE CONTRUCTIVE CRITICISM OR DON'T POST AT ALL. DO NOT USE OFFENSIVE LANGUAGE IN THESE "BATTLES", WHICH INCLUDES OFFENSIVE RACIAL SLURS.
YOU ALL HAVE BEEN WARNED. -Fae Yo I'm just trying to prove my point// I'm trying to make this a burning hot joint// Y'all people can't feel my rhymes and lines// Ask the cop why I got over 5,000 fines// My girls got more taste on me than bud light// All you gotta do is holla and i'll make ya tight// I'm gonna take this shit to the hardcore extreme// I'm like The Game because I get nightmares and dreams// Yeah dejayyyy my name is jason..// I'm attempting to get a trace-in// You're freddy kreuger? oh man i'm going to get feared// Ask all my hip-hop fans, they'll say I always get cheered// If you wanna be freddy dejayyy, you must be afraid of fire// Damn, That's pity no wonder you can't get any higher// When I get retired, The Kangsta will be remembered// So i'm gonna finish you off, i hope you get dismembered// Yeah you are the game dejayyyy because i always play you// First improve your freestyles bytch and I will pay you// Yeah i'm 50 cent because I get a lot of beef// Call me the king because I'm always the cheef// And now one more thing dejayyy don't disrespect me// I achieved more than you losa, I'm always connected// Call me the hard mirror, because I'm always reflected// This post has been edited by uninspiredfae: Jul 15 2005, 12:30 AM |
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Jul 11 2005, 11:10 PM
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 My name's Katt. Nice to meet you!  Group: Member Posts: 3,826 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 93,674 |
"Yo I'm just trying to prove my point//
I'm trying to make this a burning hot joint//" A burning hot joint? You smoke? Would you like me to alert the police? noun: marijuana leaves rolled into a cigarette for smoking noun: junction by which parts or objects are joined together noun: a disreputable place of entertainment noun: (anatomy) the point of connection between two bones or elements of a skeleton (especially if the articulation allows motion) noun: a piece of meat roasted or for roasting and of a size for slicing into more than one portion noun: the shape or manner in which things come together and a connection is made Sorry, but those lines made no sense. Because you have no point. Y'all people can't feel my rhymes and lines// Ask the cop why I got over 5,000 fines// Jason, no one WANTS to feel your rhymes and lines. Violating the law over 5000 times isn't something to be proud of. My girls got more taste on me than bud light// All you gotta do is holla and i'll make ya tight// What girls? You'll make them tight? Jesus, please spare me. I'm gonna take this shit to the hardcore extreme// I'm like The Game because I get nightmares and dreams// You don't even know what hardcore is. And everyone has nightmares and dreams, you idiot. Yeah dejayyyy my name is jason..// I'm attempting to get a trace-in// You're freddy kreuger? oh man i'm going to get feared// Ask all my hip-hop fans, they'll say I always get cheered// "Get feared" makes no sense. You need to learn your grammar, son. If you wanna be freddy dejayyy, you must be afraid of fire// Damn, That's pity no wonder you can't get any higher// No, Jason, you're a pity. When I get retired, The Kangsta will be remembered// So i'm gonna finish you off, i hope you get dismembered// Lmfao. I HOPE YOU GET DISMEMBERED, BITCH! Yeah you are the game dejayyyy because i always play you// First improve your freestyles bytch and I will pay you// YOU PLAY WITH DJ? And was the second line supposed to be an insult? You don't tell someone you're dissing to improve their rhymes so you can pay them. Yeah i'm 50 cent because I get a lot of beef// Call me the king because I'm always the cheef// No, Jason.. No, you're not the CHIEF. And now one more thing dejayyy don't disrespect me// Where did this line come from? I achieved more than you losa, I'm always connected// Call me the hard mirror, because I'm always reflected// That made no sense whatsoever. Alright, I'm done with my analyzation of your rhymes. Don't take it personally. While other people freestyle, I'd rather use logic. |
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Statistik my rap Jul 11 2005, 07:45 PM
wind&fire you can drive? Jul 11 2005, 07:46 PM DrNick311 This is yet another example of why you need to get... Jul 11 2005, 08:13 PM Just Blaze If you are interested, I am looking for new rapper... Jul 11 2005, 08:13 PM Hiphop d[-_-]b omgoodness. please do NOT give the boy hope. then ... Jul 11 2005, 10:53 PM RockizLife God. Help this young man boy. Jul 11 2005, 11:09 PM sadolakced acid GOD. boy, get your syncapation right, your rhymes... Jul 11 2005, 11:33 PM lbjshaq2345 QUOTECall me the hard mirror, because I'm alwa... Jul 11 2005, 11:40 PM CrackedRearView Do you have to ruin the writing forum with this dr... Jul 12 2005, 01:30 AM J-DraGoNz Lol everywhere I go this kid gets nothing but hate... Jul 12 2005, 08:49 AM xquizit ^ We diss him because he doesn't write his lyr... Jul 12 2005, 01:09 PM
J-DraGoNz QUOTE(xquizit @ Jul 12 2005, 11:09 AM)^ We di... Jul 13 2005, 01:51 AM L!ckitySplit ^ ya she did
i thought he said he was gonna write... Jul 12 2005, 01:13 PM Hiphop d[-_-]b QUOTEBut you gotta realize that true hip hop comes... Jul 12 2005, 01:37 PM De112 dissing me back, eh jason?! hahaha. don't ... Jul 12 2005, 01:41 PM De112 FROM NOW ON, ALL THE DISSES SHALL BE POSTED IN THE... Jul 12 2005, 01:43 PM L!ckitySplit lol yaaaaaay!
*claps* Jul 12 2005, 01:46 PM beautifuls0ul_x3 DJ, everyday you seem to amaze me. <3 That shit... Jul 12 2005, 01:47 PM beautifuls0ul_x3 jason, honestly you went all over the place and it... Jul 12 2005, 02:12 PM Funky Buddha Shit is awesome man! hahahah
Jason just gets p... Jul 12 2005, 02:34 PM Azarel Stop ruining the writing forum with your childish ... Jul 12 2005, 02:37 PM De112 QUOTE(Azarel @ Jul 12 2005, 1:37 PM)Stop ruin... Jul 12 2005, 02:43 PM Azarel QUOTE(De112 @ Jul 12 2005, 12:43 PM)whoa calm... Jul 12 2005, 02:51 PM De112 QUOTE(Azarel @ Jul 12 2005, 1:51 PM)I really ... Jul 12 2005, 02:53 PM Paradox of Life QUOTE(Azarel @ Jul 12 2005, 1:51 PM)I really ... Jul 12 2005, 07:30 PM basick QUOTE(Azarel @ Jul 12 2005, 12:51 PM)I really... Jul 12 2005, 07:49 PM L!ckitySplit QUOTE(Azarel @ Jul 12 2005, 3:37 PM)Stop ruin... Jul 12 2005, 07:12 PM not_your_average I'll have to agree with Anna, Katt and Justin.... Jul 14 2005, 01:34 PM basick QUOTE(not_your_average @ Jul 14 2005, 11:34 A... Jul 14 2005, 08:09 PM jooleeah That was amusing. Wow... Jul 12 2005, 02:48 PM nightmare4taki That wasn't bad Jason. Just have to say this
... Jul 12 2005, 03:00 PM nightmare4taki Jason try again man you just got murked in Round o... Jul 12 2005, 03:09 PM chaneun DJ, guess what?
All you sucker MCs got nothing on... Jul 12 2005, 03:24 PM De112 QUOTE(chaneun @ Jul 12 2005, 2:24 PM)DJ, gues... Jul 12 2005, 04:35 PM wind&fire QUOTE(chaneun @ Jul 13 2005, 6:24 AM)DJ, gues... Jul 12 2005, 07:03 PM mocassinsx29 ^ Such a good sport. :)
Nice rhymes, I'm sick... Jul 12 2005, 06:52 PM lbjshaq2345 ok how bout dj goes to entertainment cuz it is ent... Jul 12 2005, 07:02 PM chaneun ^I know, I just wrote it out as a rap because I ca... Jul 12 2005, 07:10 PM Lo Mein dammmnn you busted on himm Jul 12 2005, 07:34 PM Statistik I really don't know what your doin in your hip... Jul 12 2005, 08:38 PM basick QUOTE(Jason61992 @ Jul 12 2005, 6:38 PM)I rea... Jul 12 2005, 08:39 PM L!ckitySplit QUOTE(basick @ Jul 12 2005, 9:39 PM)that was ... Jul 12 2005, 08:43 PM wayne umm.... nice i guess? first line was tight.. but y... Jul 12 2005, 08:40 PM De112 ha, u really wanna get pwned eh? Jul 12 2005, 08:41 PM basick that was awesome-n-hot. Jul 12 2005, 08:43 PM beautifuls0ul_x3 this may i say is the worst diss in history.
QUOT... Jul 12 2005, 09:10 PM Fallen Fairy pwn?
fallen fairy Jul 12 2005, 09:15 PM Azarel QUOTE(L!ckitySplit @ Jul 12 2005, 5:12 PM... Jul 12 2005, 09:16 PM L!ckitySplit QUOTE(Azarel @ Jul 12 2005, 10:16 PM)Child, t... Jul 13 2005, 08:38 PM stephinika ^^x2
because no one who could close it hasn... Jul 12 2005, 09:17 PM basick QUOTE(stephinika @ Jul 12 2005, 7:17 PM)pleas... Jul 13 2005, 06:34 PM Paradox of Life QUOTE(basick @ Jul 13 2005, 5:34 PM)why?
1.... Jul 13 2005, 07:00 PM brownsugar08 QUOTE(AkaRyux @ Jul 13 2005, 8:00 PM)1. It... Jul 13 2005, 07:06 PM De112 QUOTE(brownsugar08 @ Jul 13 2005, 6:06 PM)Kat... Jul 13 2005, 08:35 PM Paradox of Life QUOTE(brownsugar08 @ Jul 13 2005, 6:06 PM)Kat... Jul 13 2005, 11:38 PM J-DraGoNz QUOTE(AkaRyux @ Jul 13 2005, 9:38 PM)I could ... Jul 13 2005, 11:44 PM CrackedRearView QUOTE(J-DraGoNz @ Jul 13 2005, 9:44 PM)w... Jul 14 2005, 08:21 AM J-DraGoNz QUOTE(CrackedRearView @ Jul 14 2005, 6:21 AM)... Jul 14 2005, 04:01 PM stephinika QUOTEplease stop with the raps with only the point... Jul 12 2005, 09:18 PM wind&fire ^cos hes an inserure 12 year old korean with no re... Jul 13 2005, 03:34 AM Frankie guys, stop with the member bashing. i'm closin... Jul 13 2005, 01:22 PM kryogenix http://www.createblog.com/forums/index.php...1... Jul 13 2005, 02:46 PM J-DraGoNz dejay that was pretty dope Jul 13 2005, 02:47 PM De112 so...what...it's...opened...again? so can i co... Jul 13 2005, 04:56 PM J-DraGoNz I hope I didn't start a bunch of like...hatred... Jul 13 2005, 09:29 PM Hiphop d[-_-]b QUOTESick of what? Is not clicking a topic that ha... Jul 15 2005, 01:45 AM HoodieObsessed hey, I think you guys are being a little harsh.
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