Friendship, poetry |
 Jul 10 2005, 05:39 AM
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 Another ditch in the road... you keep moving  Group: Member Posts: 6,281 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 85,152  |
dead?
or just rotten to the core to the bone marrow with the stench of evil evil? or the absence of love? neglect hurts like a fist but without pain can we heal? let's heal a friendship cant sink according, interestingly to Friends but damn we can hit those icebergs so climb of the boat and sit on the iceberg and drift on a frozen sea with me |
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Jul 10 2005, 11:45 AM
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 Crying Behind Blind Eyes Group: Member Posts: 257 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 7,967 |
You're a great poet. You just keep the reader wanting more, and then it ends, and it ends well.
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racoons > you Friendship Jul 10 2005, 05:39 AM
`SWTWiNKLE3YES i really like the ending ^.^ great job! Jul 10 2005, 11:34 AM stephinika wow i really, really like this one. it flows soo w... Jul 10 2005, 02:55 PM
sharerol QUOTE(stephinika @ Jul 10 2005, 12:55 PM)wow ... Jul 10 2005, 06:04 PM RiddleMeWonders QUOTE(MarchHare2UrAlice @ Jul 10 2005, 5:39 A... Jul 10 2005, 09:56 PM |
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