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 Jun 25 2005, 10:39 AM
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 Another ditch in the road... you keep moving  Group: Member Posts: 6,281 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 85,152  |
The Edge
trip. stumble. fall. tumble without knowing down the stairs along the hall a descent to the cellar while i sit at the kitchen table insufficient foresight to see the edge of the cliff screaming, spiralling down i still havent seen the edge if being yourself hurts someone else can i be another me? inividuality the key to misery? hypocrisy and falacies? the bottom getting close crack of a broken neck and i still havent seen the edge |
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Jul 9 2005, 01:47 AM
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Mr. Hottie Group: Member Posts: 406 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 104,225 |
great!
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racoons > you the edge Jun 25 2005, 10:39 AM
stephinika very nicely written. your vocabulary is great, alw... Jun 25 2005, 02:13 PM ChasingLife87 oh WOW, I like that... the last line especially. W... Jun 25 2005, 03:41 PM xhotnspicyx nice, very nice. I like it, good writing. Jun 25 2005, 04:00 PM RiddleMeWonders You never bore me James. It's funny how when y... Jun 26 2005, 05:01 PM racoons > you thank you, lindsay!
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