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hanging on by the mask you hide behind
TreesTurnMeOn
post Jul 7 2005, 08:55 PM
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Canadian Boyfriend, I think it's time
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Need me
Water in your lungs
Unknotted rope
Yet it has hung
From tangles of
My heart's despair
Your words are shattered
Lieing there
He will enter
He will find
There's no more treasure
In my mind
You robbed it off
The hollow mass
Waste and death
Breathe your last
Don't we look pretty
Faking this
You're such a liar
When we kiss
This empty chest
This echoed throbbing
A lonely shell
Heartless sobbing
I loose my mind
At the rotting scent
Of your own existent
I recieve no consent
You look so clean
Eyes burning;on fire
Fitting this scene
You are taken a liar
Paint your walls
With my insides
Close your eyes
Try to sleep this time
Go ahead
Blame it on me
Continue with your life
Your superiority
Force my stomach
To purge the words
I swallowed politely
You never heard
Drown the wails
Of a siren long gone
Look at this shitty
Life you've drawn
On the surface
Where we fought
That is where
Your insides rot
You attempted
Heartless manslaughter
Sunken ships
Belong underwater
 
 
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[Deep]Thought63
post Jul 9 2005, 12:06 AM
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Mr. Hottie
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your poems are good, but very poised. shifty.gif
 

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