As the Heavens Cry |
As the Heavens Cry |
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As the Heavens Cry
I listen to the tears fall from your eyes This distance between us I greatly despise I want to hold you and make it feel right But the days ahead, for us, are not looking very bright You asked me tonight if I ever cry I didn't know how to tell you each moment I die Knowing that it can never be Knowing I'll never get to say "It's just you and me" I told you I'd be there to wipe away every tear It's difficult to do that when I'm trapped away here I listen closely as the heavens cry I cannot seem to stop asking myself why Why can't I make her happiness last forever? Why do they deny us ever being together? I have such a passion to make all your dreams come true All I want from everything is the best for you Even if the best for you does not include me Your happiness and beautiful smile forever I wish to see |
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![]() My name's Katt. Nice to meet you! ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 3,826 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 93,674 ![]() |
Aw, that's cute. It has so much emotion, especially from a guy. It's good that you don't keep them all bottled up inside you. I love your poems, but for all that emotion, why restrain them in a rhyming scheme? I think you'd do excellent if you tried your hand at a free verse poem. You're awesome. Keep up the good work, love.
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