Vines of Beauty, [poem] |
 Jul 7 2005, 10:09 PM
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Vines of Beauty
The eternal dying light Of bloody vines of beauty, Call forth to the time and height, The colors fulfilling their duty. A wonder to the touch of its eyes, A firm holding to its resonating voice, Controlling and manipulating breath of the known, Concludes to fiery beauty; an intsturment of its own. The black screen is decorated, A core explodes with ravaging power And a forgotten reflex is built, Leaving a neon path behind. It persuades the wind to captivate humans. The next one isn't merely a semblence, But a veil of inalienable light, Searching for a resemblance. So, can you guess what I'm talking about? |
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Jul 8 2005, 10:43 PM
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 My name's Katt. Nice to meet you! Group: Member Posts: 3,826 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 93,674 |
Wow, one of the most beautiful pieces I've ever read. And it makes a lot more sense after knowing it's about fireworks. Great job! I'd love to hear more from you.
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xblueradiance Vines of Beauty Jul 7 2005, 10:09 PM
Musouka QUOTE(xblueradiance @ Jul 7 2005, 8:09 PM)Vin... Jul 7 2005, 10:46 PM
xblueradiance QUOTE(Musouka @ Jul 7 2005, 11:46 PM)It is ve... Jul 8 2005, 04:53 PM laxumaster8 i agree with Musouka. your poem is lovely...it i... Jul 7 2005, 10:51 PM [Deep]Thought63 very exquisite. Jul 8 2005, 11:54 PM |
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