As the Heavens Cry |
| *RockizLife* |
 Jul 7 2005, 11:45 PM
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As the Heavens Cry
I listen to the tears fall from your eyes This distance between us I greatly despise I want to hold you and make it feel right But the days ahead, for us, are not looking very bright You asked me tonight if I ever cry I didn't know how to tell you each moment I die Knowing that it can never be Knowing I'll never get to say "It's just you and me" I told you I'd be there to wipe away every tear It's difficult to do that when I'm trapped away here I listen closely as the heavens cry I cannot seem to stop asking myself why Why can't I make her happiness last forever? Why do they deny us ever being together? I have such a passion to make all your dreams come true All I want from everything is the best for you Even if the best for you does not include me Your happiness and beautiful smile forever I wish to see |
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Jul 8 2005, 01:56 AM
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Wow. I love the title and the whole poem itself.
QUOTE I listen to the tears fall from your eyes This distance between us I greatly despise I liked that part. |
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RockizLife As the Heavens Cry Jul 7 2005, 11:45 PM
laxumaster8 great writing...i like your title....thanks for sh... Jul 7 2005, 11:49 PM stephinika brenden right? that was amazing...it sounds almost... Jul 8 2005, 01:07 AM RockizLife Thanks I'm glad you all enjoyed it!! Jul 8 2005, 11:28 PM Paradox of Life Aw, that's cute. It has so much emotion, espec... Jul 8 2005, 11:39 PM [Deep]Thought63 wow! that's really tranquil. Jul 8 2005, 11:52 PM RockizLife Yeah, it's about something I'm going throu... Jul 12 2005, 11:43 PM
jeSs1cA That was amazing Brenden Jul 13 2005, 12:21 PM |
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