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giving up daisies
RiddleMeWonders
post Jul 5 2005, 02:46 AM
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When I was a little girl
I acted the way you'd think I'd act now.
And now it's quite the opposite
I act the way you might see a little girl act.

I'd much rather take a nap,
or use a coloring book
than go to another stupid party
where everyone knows everyones secrets
come monday at school.

I don't have to succumb to the facts
that graduation is looming 4 semesters away right now
but I suppose I should get it together
And give up my daises to trade them in for a portfolio
college applications and diving into forever.

I'm afraid.
I admitt it.
I do not want to grow up.
Times like these I desperately wish I could fly to never never land
but thoughts like that are ridiculous.
All I have to do is look at the prince of pop to know
You can run away from responsiblity
but it catches up to you anyway
I'd give anything to keep my daises
if only for another year, another week
or just another day.
 
 
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KissMe2408
post Jul 7 2005, 01:24 AM
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Nicely done :) I really like your concept about giving up daises, and trading them in. Never growing up, never wanting to grow up..but it's inevitable. THe poem is very honest and straight out there. I think it's fantastic :) Keep on posting more :)
 

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