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Weeping Willow
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post Jun 30 2005, 03:00 PM
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Another ditch in the road... you keep moving
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fetish
for the bizarre
teardropped pillows turn me on
cry me a million tears
because love hurts
i dont want to hurt you
i cant help it if i do
bu ti love it when you cry
weep a while for joy?
but love HURTS!
but what about the caresses?
gentle touches?
the LOVE?
'neath the weeping willow
sob your heart out to the soil
while i sit and watched, bemused
what the f**k are you on?
im sorry, but this isnt normal.
are you crying to please me
think i have the sick fantasy?
but even if i did, why weep for sadness?
come on...
 
 
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yummy_delight
post Jun 30 2005, 04:16 PM
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Lauren loves YOU.
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i like it. a touch sadistic, but that's what gives the poem its charm.

wonderful job. _smile.gif
 
sharerol
post Jul 5 2005, 11:24 PM
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that heaven is overrated
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QUOTE(yummy_delight @ Jun 30 2005, 2:16 PM)
i like it. a touch sadistic, but that's what gives the poem its charm.

wonderful job.  _smile.gif

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I agree 100%. thumbsup.gif
 

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