My Summer Romance, [a summer poem]...brief, but to tha pt. |
 Jul 3 2005, 11:16 PM
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 silly rabbit  Group: Member Posts: 153 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 94,435  |
"My Summer Romance"
The crescent moon shines ever so bright, As we lie beneath the stars, The night sky writes a message of love, Reflecting whats in our hearts. This Summer breeze against our skin, Caressing our every sense, Gives hope to 'us', to everything, To our Summer romance. |
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Jul 4 2005, 04:45 PM
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 It eats you, starting with your bottom. Group: Member Posts: 1,999 Joined: Jun 2005 Member No: 160,674 |
i like it, it has good flow and it is to the point!<<and its sweet! good job! ~_~
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emo_in_urpanties My Summer Romance Jul 3 2005, 11:16 PM
Paradox of Life I thought the length would be a downpoint, but I l... Jul 4 2005, 06:49 PM mocassinsx29 Ah, when I saw 'brief' I knew I had to cli... Jul 5 2005, 04:08 PM
[Deep]Thought63 how romantic. Jul 9 2005, 01:26 AM |
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