Angel Eyes, Poem |
 Jun 30 2005, 11:09 PM
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 Crying Behind Blind Eyes  Group: Member Posts: 257 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 7,967  |
Yeah, kind of...sadistic poem.
---------------------- Forsake me, With your angel eyes, Sweet incubus, Sweet devil. Forget me, Berate me, Kill me, As I cry alone. Throw me out, Into hailstorms, And blizzards, And unclean snow. Hit me, And abuse me, Toss me to the side, To pick me up and use me. Blame me, And maim me, And I'll apologize every time, To your sweet, angel eyes. |
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Jul 3 2005, 09:46 AM
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 My name's Katt. Nice to meet you! Group: Member Posts: 3,826 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 93,674 |
Ooh, I really like this one and you're such a good writer. I love the concept, but it seemed a bit abrupt and short. I wanted to hear more.
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Sa-Chan Angel Eyes Jun 30 2005, 11:09 PM
stephinika wow. well written...almost reminds me of something... Jul 1 2005, 01:29 AM mocassinsx29 :( Another sad poem, but I like it. It has a good ... Jul 1 2005, 04:39 PM MyVermilionPlague *agrees with Steph*
What a great beginning!
I... Jul 1 2005, 10:45 PM ryfitaDF pretty BA. Jul 2 2005, 05:06 PM Musouka I like it very much. It got the point accross sudd... Jul 5 2005, 10:40 PM `SWTWiNKLE3YES ^ i agree good choice of words
thats very nice. KE... Jul 7 2005, 10:02 PM
[Deep]Thought63 sadistic, almost like a charitic angel Jul 9 2005, 12:00 AM |
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