Angel Eyes, Poem |
 Jun 30 2005, 11:09 PM
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 Crying Behind Blind Eyes  Group: Member Posts: 257 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 7,967  |
Yeah, kind of...sadistic poem.
---------------------- Forsake me, With your angel eyes, Sweet incubus, Sweet devil. Forget me, Berate me, Kill me, As I cry alone. Throw me out, Into hailstorms, And blizzards, And unclean snow. Hit me, And abuse me, Toss me to the side, To pick me up and use me. Blame me, And maim me, And I'll apologize every time, To your sweet, angel eyes. |
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Jul 1 2005, 10:45 PM
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Brie Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 10,172 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 20,548 |
*agrees with Steph*
What a great beginning! I love it. Great, great job. 
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Sa-Chan Angel Eyes Jun 30 2005, 11:09 PM
stephinika wow. well written...almost reminds me of something... Jul 1 2005, 01:29 AM mocassinsx29 :( Another sad poem, but I like it. It has a good ... Jul 1 2005, 04:39 PM ryfitaDF pretty BA. Jul 2 2005, 05:06 PM Paradox of Life Ooh, I really like this one and you're such a ... Jul 3 2005, 09:46 AM Musouka I like it very much. It got the point accross sudd... Jul 5 2005, 10:40 PM `SWTWiNKLE3YES ^ i agree good choice of words
thats very nice. KE... Jul 7 2005, 10:02 PM
[Deep]Thought63 sadistic, almost like a charitic angel Jul 9 2005, 12:00 AM |
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