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 Jun 24 2005, 11:08 PM
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Why is my life slipping? I thought I was who I wanted to be Now everythings different Is this you, or is this me? I can't figure out anything now Seems like everythings a struggle I'm sick and tired of asking how... How did I get this way? I'm tired of everything Rageing on inside I want to end this now Where can I hide? I feel all alone, trapped and scared Why is my life slipping? Has anyone cared? I hope that you can see The way I feel I fall to one knee I look up at Him I ask him why, "Why does this have to be?" I don't understand now I thought I knew who I was Can you answer how? How did I get this way? I feel theres no control Everythings gone With life comes a heavy toll I wish I could move on © Brenden Noll |
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Jun 28 2005, 02:19 PM
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 What a hypocrite.  Group: Member Posts: 2,754 Joined: Apr 2005 Member No: 128,150 |
Great form of writing, Brenden. I like this part
QUOTE I hope that you can see The way I feel I fall to one knee I look up at Him I ask him why, "Why does this have to be?" Who are you referring to though? 
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RockizLife Slipping Jun 24 2005, 11:08 PM
RockizLife Him capitalized refers to God. Thanks I'm glad... Jun 30 2005, 01:31 PM [Deep]Thought63 i like this part too Jul 9 2005, 01:42 AM _suzie_ aw yeah i liked this poem, ive been there before. ... Jul 10 2005, 12:04 PM this__love wow. i really like it. you are a terrific poet and... Jul 11 2005, 06:52 AM yellowgurl ^ same.. i wish i could move on from being so chil... Jul 11 2005, 06:59 PM
yellowgurl sorry double post.. computer screw up Jul 11 2005, 06:59 PM |
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