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my 5th track, "true meaning of a playa" featuring, hana. lyrics all set.
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post Jun 25 2005, 06:42 PM
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post Jun 26 2005, 12:13 AM
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Jason... do you know your bar structure is HORRIBLE and you're not even writing full verses... Hana actually wrote a 16 bar verse, which surprised me... props to her for even being able to that.... you don't even know how to count bars... shit, give it a rest

Yeah the real playa is standing right here
I'll murder ya life dawg, dont avoid your fear
I get girls, I get money, I get cash, I get hoes
Follow me girl and ill give you some rides of my twenty fo's
See, there are no betta playas than me
Yeah, too hard to believe me because you can't see me.
Man I like sex, i like cash i'm more than a hustla
I make my rhymes harder than busta!
Hate Me Or Love Me, I'm trying to make my self clear
I should explain more about a playa, because you can't hear.
Disconnect with da kangsta
Now connect with hana banana

and Jason... you don't give someone "rides of my twenty fo's"... do you even know what 24's are? and how 'bout you actually rap somethin' that is relative to your life... you're 13 kid.... you don't get "hoes"... you might get some money (your weekly allowance), and the way you act, I don't even think you "get girls".... and I can't see you cuz when I look straight you ain't in my visual path... you like 4 foot probly.... kid... grow up.....................

I know 13 year olds that would beat'cha ass..... my boy got cousins in Franklin and Sayreville dass your age... if you wanna be introduced, just gimme the sign 'n maybe they can teach you to act your age
 

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Statistik   my 5th track, "true meaning of a playa" featuring   Jun 25 2005, 06:42 PM
basick   hana you are a lesbian?? hana - QUOTEIm the k...   Jun 25 2005, 06:45 PM
videogamsta   Yea thats what i was thinking but good lyrics.   Jun 25 2005, 07:06 PM
beautifuls0ul_x3   Steven...don't make me hurt you. ill even prov...   Jun 25 2005, 07:07 PM
basick   QUOTE(beautifuls0ul_x3 @ Jun 25 2005, 5:07 PM...   Jun 25 2005, 07:07 PM
Statistik   Both of you stop!   Jun 25 2005, 07:09 PM
x____duckii   QUOTEI get girls, I get money, I get cash, I get h...   Jun 25 2005, 10:22 PM
basick   ^ maybe you didnt see were it said ft hana... cau...   Jun 25 2005, 10:25 PM
basick   QUOTE(basick @ Jun 25 2005, 8:25 PM)about hal...   Jun 25 2005, 10:32 PM
x____duckii   ^ I only quoted 2 things that Hana said.   Jun 25 2005, 10:27 PM
basick   ^ and you quoted 5 total   Jun 25 2005, 10:28 PM
x____duckii   ^ Yeah, so that doesn't make half.   Jun 25 2005, 10:28 PM
x____duckii   ^ Oooh, my bad. I didn't notice about there, u...   Jun 25 2005, 10:34 PM
dahding   QUOTE(x____duckii @ Jun 25 2005, 11:28 PM)^ Y...   Jun 25 2005, 10:36 PM
PENtheINSTRUMENT   Jason... do you know your bar structure is HORRIBL...   Jun 26 2005, 12:13 AM
SWIZZ   DAMN BIATCH.. YOU GOT YOUR ASS HANDED TO YOU BY PE...   Jun 26 2005, 12:28 AM
Paradox of Life   QUOTE(SWIZZ @ Jun 25 2005, 11:28 PM)DAMN BIAT...   Jun 26 2005, 01:33 AM
racoons > you   well, its entertaining me, so i think it can stay ...   Jun 26 2005, 07:01 AM


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