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Summer Dreams, my first poem submitted =]
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post Jun 24 2005, 09:34 PM
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Summer Dreams

You feel the last days of
Summer that linger on
In the cool night breeze
As the days of summer fade into the pass
Walking into the shadows of a lonely starless night
Alone with unspoken thoughts of the eternal pass
Loneliness crumbles under your steps as you
Stretch forward to heaven’s light
But only to find nothing
You feel cheated from existence
Emptiness haunts within you
As you disappeared from my summer dream

By//Liz

[did this in skool... I was bored pinch.gif]
 
 
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*SimplePlan_Luvr*
post Jun 24 2005, 11:06 PM
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submitted it 2 da cb newpaper thang lol thxs 4 reminding mee lol
 

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SimplePlan_Luvr   Summer Dreams   Jun 24 2005, 09:34 PM
CrazayChristian   Not bad, not bad. Something about it just really t...   Jun 24 2005, 09:37 PM
emazing   It's reminds me of soft summer breezes (haha, ...   Jun 24 2005, 09:55 PM
SimplePlan_Luvr   submitted it 2 da cb newpaper thang lol thxs 4 rem...   Jun 24 2005, 11:06 PM
[Deep]Thought63   sort of warm poem, botanic life. i love nature...   Jul 9 2005, 01:55 AM


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