Summer Dreams, my first poem submitted =] |
Summer Dreams, my first poem submitted =] |
*SimplePlan_Luvr* |
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Summer Dreams
You feel the last days of Summer that linger on In the cool night breeze As the days of summer fade into the pass Walking into the shadows of a lonely starless night Alone with unspoken thoughts of the eternal pass Loneliness crumbles under your steps as you Stretch forward to heaven’s light But only to find nothing You feel cheated from existence Emptiness haunts within you As you disappeared from my summer dream By//Liz [did this in skool... I was bored ![]() |
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![]() The Texan ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 430 Joined: May 2005 Member No: 136,431 ![]() |
Not bad, not bad. Something about it just really tugs at me.
I give it 2 thumbs, 1 toe, a shoulder, and an ear up ^_^ |
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