Depths of Depravity, a poem...but not... |
 Jun 22 2005, 07:59 PM
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So it's been a while...I'm back lol...with a new poem but not...I don't think it's poetry because my stuff doesn't fit into the normal...'poetry' format...
Depths of Depravity by James aka BlueEyezBlind Yea..I'm falling... Help me. Misery growing It's not slowing Burning deeper, a hole in my mind Digging at my insides the empty cavity Caused by you Unknown to the world Hidden to myself Nothing I haven't felt before Tearing at me. Weakening me Not love, but nothing less These feelings aren't deep Though they fill me up The deeds I would do For one kiss from you Burn the thing that is my soul Throw down, lift me up For you I would sink To new depths of depravity © 2005 BEB |
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Jun 23 2005, 12:21 AM
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 Change Gon Come Group: Member Posts: 2,286 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 18,822 |
<3
its really original. short lines really illustrate your point. |
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