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 Jun 17 2005, 10:45 PM
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Sorry Daddy,
I don't call everyday . It's just, everytime we talk, i have nothing to say . I guess it's because, we've never been that close, you've never been there for me when i needed you most . I really do try to be a good daughter, but it's hard to do so, when you're a bad father . Sorry Mommy, I'm not really the best, been holding it in, but i gotta get this off my chest . I'm tired of your scolding, all you do is yell, shout, and scream . Now i'm tired of living my life through your dreams . Stop thinking that everything i do is simply corrupt, can't you accept the fact that i just want to grow up ? Let me live my life, stop holding me down . Stop looking at everything that i do with a frown . I dont understand why you just can't leave me alone . Please accept the fact that your little girl has grown . If you're tying to change me, then you're out of luck, because who cares what you want ? i don't give a f**k . |
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Jun 20 2005, 03:50 PM
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s w e e t e s t Group: Member Posts: 808 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 46,149 |
Wow. Im sorry to hear about your problem with your parent. But that is a very strong and emotional peice of writting that you've just wrote. Good Job.
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lidoxangie i'm sorry Jun 17 2005, 10:45 PM
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Poem = </3.
I like ... Jul 27 2005, 05:22 PM helllla jankyyyy It made me cry.
Ah, it was real good. Jul 30 2005, 02:20 PM
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