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 Jun 14 2005, 07:39 PM
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 i'm such a sucker sometimes.  Group: Member Posts: 441 Joined: Jun 2005 Member No: 151,732  |
A cold and dusty mirror
With its faded, broken glass It holds many tragic secrets And has witnessed my dark past I look at my reflection And don't like what I see A lost and bleeding little girl Staring back at me Her eyes are cold and distant Her face is worn and gray She tries to tell me something But is not sure of what to say A painful silence greets me My blood is running thin I know that I can't help her I'm on the outside looking in Death is coming closer Dark shadows lurking near I quickly soothe my mind with lies And swallow all my fear I look at my reflection And don't like what I see A hollow, empty little girl Crying out to me |
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Jun 17 2005, 09:01 PM
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I love you <33333 Group: Member Posts: 2,928 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 30,404 |
Your really good. You know how to make words flow. Great poem.
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Midnight Faerie Reflection Jun 14 2005, 07:39 PM
lidoxangie thats really good, i like the flow of it . Jun 14 2005, 09:20 PM emzergirl Wow...that is really good. It makes you think. Goo... Jun 14 2005, 10:51 PM Midnight Faerie ^_^ thank you for the replies. that's nice of ... Jun 15 2005, 01:21 PM stephinika i agree, its well written and i love the concept b... Jun 15 2005, 07:22 PM Sa-Chan Very good. It's something a little bit of ever... Jun 17 2005, 11:46 AM sweetxsimplicity I really like this poem! (=
Good job.
But may... Jun 17 2005, 12:34 PM
Paradox of Life QUOTE(sweetxsimplicity @ Jun 17 2005, 11:34 A... Jun 19 2005, 01:02 AM Midnight Faerie Hehe thank you. ^_^ And thanks for that advice. Jun 17 2005, 06:06 PM Midnight Faerie Hehe thankies. ^_^ You people make me feel special... Jun 19 2005, 05:14 PM tofuburger i loved it..i think it's great exactly how it... Jun 19 2005, 05:21 PM Midnight Faerie ^_^ Thank you. All of your comments have certainly... Jun 20 2005, 02:08 PM danielle_x3 i love it! keep on writing ^_^ Jun 23 2005, 09:20 PM |
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