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![]() i'm such a sucker sometimes. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 441 Joined: Jun 2005 Member No: 151,732 ![]() |
A cold and dusty mirror
With its faded, broken glass It holds many tragic secrets And has witnessed my dark past I look at my reflection And don't like what I see A lost and bleeding little girl Staring back at me Her eyes are cold and distant Her face is worn and gray She tries to tell me something But is not sure of what to say A painful silence greets me My blood is running thin I know that I can't help her I'm on the outside looking in Death is coming closer Dark shadows lurking near I quickly soothe my mind with lies And swallow all my fear I look at my reflection And don't like what I see A hollow, empty little girl Crying out to me |
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![]() hi, my name is brianna! =] ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 5,764 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 22,114 ![]() |
I really like this poem! (=
Good job. But maybe you should take out the 'with lies' in that line. It sounds like there's just too many words. >< QUOTE I quickly soothe my mind with lies But it's still an awesome poem! <33 |
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