Poetry, is it good? |
 Jun 11 2005, 10:32 PM
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Hey im new here but i read wat u guys/gurls rote so i think i know wats goin on sorta
 .Anyway i write poetry my friends and quite a few other ppl say its realli good (im not gna waste space by spamming it here) but i just wanted to know what girls think about it, is it a good thing? because thats what i write about. so just tell me what you think about poetry and if u wna hav a look at it add me on msn kabucchi@portentmail.com thnx |
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Jun 13 2005, 06:00 PM
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 My name's Katt. Nice to meet you! Group: Member Posts: 3,826 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 93,674 |
Aw, those poems are adorable. I personally don't find them very impressive, but I'm sure other people like HiddenSmile think they're good. I'm just a tough critic.
 You have strong emotions and you have no problem putting them down on paper, but the rhyming kind of throws it off. Some of your rhyming schemes are inconsistent. Try writing a free verse and not rhyming at all, so you can just put your feelings down on paper and I'm sure we can get a deeper message. 
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kabucchi Poetry Jun 11 2005, 10:32 PM
suddenly she put it in the writing forum to get an overall resp... Jun 11 2005, 10:33 PM kabucchi Here you go :)
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Like a puzzle i cant fig... Jun 11 2005, 10:42 PM HiddenSmile Dude, I read one of em, and it was good, to me. Bu... Jun 13 2005, 05:40 PM
Shattered_Hope QUOTE(HiddenSmile @ Jun 13 2005, 6:40 PM)But ... Jun 16 2005, 01:02 PM |
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