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 Jun 10 2005, 09:31 PM
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Jun 10 2005, 10:16 PM
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Omg that is really good, in a way it reminds me of Star wars 3, when Pamde' dies.
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Jun 10 2005, 10:21 PM
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 My name's Katt. Nice to meet you! Group: Member Posts: 3,826 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 93,674 |
QUOTE(iNyCxShoRT @ Jun 10 2005, 9:16 PM) Omg that is really good, in a way it reminds me of Star wars 3, when Pamde' dies.  Eek. Thanks for telling. I haven't seen the movie. Actually, my friend told me that anyway. That's really good, but you probably could do better with word choice. And if you think about it, this girl's really overreacting. Otherwise, you did a good job and the rhyming is really good and flows well. I like the ending. 
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Jun 10 2005, 10:47 PM
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QUOTE(AkaRyux @ Jun 10 2005, 10:21 PM) Eek. Thanks for telling. I haven't seen the movie. Actually, my friend told me that anyway. That's really good, but you probably could do better with word choice. And if you think about it, this girl's really overreacting. Otherwise, you did a good job and the rhyming is really good and flows well. I like the ending. haha, thanks . and no , i'm not overreacting . if you're dating a guy like mine, you'll need to kno if he's safe all the time , cuz he could get hurt anytime . fricking G T-T |
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lidoxangie can't if he's dead Jun 10 2005, 09:31 PM
BitterSweetness good job *sniff* :[ Jun 10 2005, 09:43 PM def_gn aww thats sad..
good poem though :) Jun 10 2005, 10:14 PM
ItzOnlySydney awww it's so touching. but sad at the same tim... Jun 11 2005, 02:51 PM
yukichan wow...so sad...
i like it though..good job.. Jun 11 2005, 10:33 PM |
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