Emotions |
 Jun 5 2005, 09:29 PM
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Emotions
All these Emotions- love and hate When I think about you , I cant think straight I really think about you all the time. But can you blame me, your so damn fine. When I laugh , I hope you laugh too Then maybe ill know this love is true I wont rush you , I will wait for you Ill give you roses, presents and diamond rings But remember with all that my love is what ill bring This poem just keeps going, I cant stop talking about you. But there’s just too many things I really love about you I know im not perfect but I promise to be I swear ill never be fake , Ill always be me I know I feel this spark, so when will we fight…Never! As long as I can keep you- from now to forever. Don’t make up your mind now, Take some time to think Is this the right time for you, can you see yourself with me? |
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Jun 6 2005, 04:52 AM
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wow very emorional lol. i love the last line <33 oh btw next time maybe try free-form or prose. i think most of us here at cb like those more than rhyming =)
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