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akjsd
post Jun 4 2005, 09:41 PM
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drip-drop, drip-drop,
blood pours,
her heart stops .
screams
shouts
cries
yells
nobody's here,
nobody tells .
kill
cut
torture
slash
life's gone in,
just one flash .
hurt her
beat her
brutally stab her
hell is close
but revenge is sweeter .

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short , but yeah (:
 
 
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loljuliana
post Jun 5 2005, 09:20 PM
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heheh, that's evil but good. i like it.


exactly what i was going to say
 

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lidoxangie   revenge   Jun 4 2005, 09:41 PM
anqie   heheh, that's evil but good. i like it.   Jun 4 2005, 09:43 PM
kill me please   wow.. hmm is there a name for poems written in tha...   Jun 4 2005, 10:37 PM
Statistik   wow i dont even consider that as a poem   Jun 5 2005, 08:32 AM
lidoxangie   QUOTE(Jason61992 @ Jun 5 2005, 8:32 AM)wow i ...   Jun 5 2005, 06:04 PM
def_gn   lol nice   Jun 5 2005, 02:48 PM
x3__iGiVEup   QUOTEheheh, that's evil but good. i like it. ...   Jun 5 2005, 09:20 PM
iNyCxShoRT   Oh how sexy. Ahaha, niceeeee. I love the rhythm to...   Jun 5 2005, 09:21 PM
ItzOnlySydney   very well written i love these sort of poems my on...   Jun 6 2005, 03:11 AM


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