Vector, half done Options

[monkigurl77]

I finally figured out how to use the pen tool smoothly. This is like the first vector I did in Illistrator so I'm pretty proud of it. I'll edit when I'm done with it.






Original

Please, some constructive critisum!]

*Kellie

[mezza9]

BAD STUFF FIRST
hmm.. the hair needs some shading - that is unless u make it black - which needs little to no shading (depends on ur lighting). because ur shirt is white and the background is white u need to have an outline on the shirt to show which the "white" belongs to. ur nose also needs so distincition. I can't tell where is the peak and where the other side of the cheek is. the eyes needs to be the same size. i know many vector tutorials tell u not to use white as a bg but since ur using so little layers, u might as well make it white. the pupils are not the same size either. u need to fix that. the teeth needs a little distinction too. we don't have one all white tooth. we have many teeth. so u need to show that. i'm not asking u to shade every single detail. i'm asking u to show the lines at least. but since it has lighting u have to distinguish the lines from light to dark. meaning the tooth closer to the light must have lighter lines and the tooth furthest would have darker lines. i think u know what i'm saying. :) the red part is kinda messy. i can see two different hues. as in one of the red is redder and the other one is pinker. u need to uniform it or change the hueof the pink to match the red.

GOOD STUFF NOW.
beautiful lips. the color choice is great! it blends very well despite the little use of layers. the lines are well curved. looks very neat.