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 Jun 4 2005, 09:41 PM
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Senior Member  Group: Member Posts: 512 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 9,682  |
drip-drop, drip-drop,
blood pours, her heart stops . screams shouts cries yells nobody's here, nobody tells . kill cut torture slash life's gone in, just one flash . hurt her beat her brutally stab her hell is close but revenge is sweeter . ---- short , but yeah (: |
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Jun 4 2005, 10:37 PM
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 im addicted to my car<3 Group: Member Posts: 635 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 92,236 |
wow.. hmm is there a name for poems written in that form? i think there is but i cant remember what. anyway good job
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lidoxangie revenge Jun 4 2005, 09:41 PM
anqie heheh, that's evil but good. i like it. Jun 4 2005, 09:43 PM Statistik wow i dont even consider that as a poem Jun 5 2005, 08:32 AM
lidoxangie QUOTE(Jason61992 @ Jun 5 2005, 8:32 AM)wow i ... Jun 5 2005, 06:04 PM def_gn lol nice Jun 5 2005, 02:48 PM x3__iGiVEup QUOTEheheh, that's evil but good. i like it.
... Jun 5 2005, 09:20 PM iNyCxShoRT Oh how sexy. Ahaha, niceeeee. I love the rhythm to... Jun 5 2005, 09:21 PM ItzOnlySydney very well written i love these sort of poems my on... Jun 6 2005, 03:11 AM |
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