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 May 31 2005, 07:51 PM
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why are people so stupid?
why can't we avoid fights? why can't we live life peacefully? why do we choose to be alone ? why do we fear forces we can't see or feel? why can't we see ourselves for what we really are? why can't we see those who lie to us? why do we lie to ourselves? why do we create imaginary worlds/lives/dimensions? why can't i be me? why cant you be you? why do you choose to be with her/him? and why can't you be with me? why won't you let me love you ? why wont i let myself love? why does the look of her make me sick inside? sad? why can't i stand your smile or your beautiful face anymore? why does your name make my ears bleed? why does your touch make my skin burn in a blaze of agony? why does your existance Disturb MINE!!!!? what does this to me? You wanna know why? -------------- -------- ------- ------ ----- ---- --- -- -Because.. Humanity is it's own greatest tragedy. _____________________________ ______ _____ ____ ___ __ _ Yeah.. So... What do you all think? |
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Jun 4 2005, 02:07 AM
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^ yea i have to agree with her. the break with the dashes is weird but the concept is great.
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d0nchikit0 Humanity May 31 2005, 07:51 PM
Azarel I like neither the break with dashes nor the collo... Jun 1 2005, 05:29 PM danishcookiez Hm, your emotions can be felt through this well, b... Jun 4 2005, 08:45 PM iNyCxShoRT "why does your touch make my skin burn in a b... Jun 4 2005, 08:46 PM Kathleen I love the subject matter. And this is so brutally... Jun 6 2005, 01:05 PM LOVE machine x i dont like poems that ask me questions >.< Jun 8 2005, 01:51 PM d0nchikit0 It's not really a poem.. Jun 8 2005, 11:09 PM def_gn QUOTE(LOVE machine x @ Jun 8 2005, 7:51 PM)i ... Jun 9 2005, 04:47 PM wchoi37 it's not really a poem..
but good points Jun 12 2005, 08:08 AM
Paradox of Life QUOTE(wchoi37 @ Jun 12 2005, 7:08 AM)it's... Jun 12 2005, 04:16 PM d0nchikit0 Well, It's not a poem but it is writing so I p... Jun 12 2005, 02:41 PM |
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