Angel from Above |
 Jun 1 2005, 08:56 PM
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Jun 1 2005, 09:09 PM
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*Influential Guitarist & Inspiring Writer* Group: Official Member Posts: 1,217 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,134 |
 that was like sooooo good lol but yeah, very well written you capture alot of every day life and expirience, good catch on the emotions and choice of words. Rhyme scheme is good better than your last one  but anyways it was good...GOOD JOB  YOU ROCK MY SOCKS !! HAHAHAH
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lidoxangie Angel from Above Jun 1 2005, 08:56 PM
Paradox of Life Wow, that was very good. The rhymes are perfect an... Jun 2 2005, 05:42 PM Cloud_X Yay, we have another love poet on our hands! I... Jun 2 2005, 08:07 PM
ItzOnlySydney lol not cliche' very original. i love the dang... Jun 4 2005, 01:57 AM |
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