You Left Your Scent on My Shirt |
You Left Your Scent on My Shirt |
May 26 2005, 06:19 PM
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I've been mulling over writing this for the past week and since I have nothing to do, I figured now's the time to do it.
------- you left your scent on my shirt there we were at last. face to face. lips to lips. tongue to tongue. arms embracing each other so strongly. a year's worth of longing culminating in a kiss so wonderful. it's funny, you know. i had been building that moment up in my mind for so long that it seems strange for it to finally have happened. an hour or two after it was over, i thought to myself, "was this just a dream? has my mind taken what I wanted so dearly and created a fantasy so vivid that I believe it to be true?" but then I realized that my shirt smelled like you. like some alluring scent that I have not in my possession. and the fantasy of us became startlingly real. |
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May 30 2005, 11:43 AM
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damn. i can relate to that sooo much. thank you for writing such a beautiful poem.
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Madame C You Left Your Scent on My Shirt May 26 2005, 06:19 PM
mona lisa Wow Carrie, this is very beautiful. Diction is sup... May 26 2005, 06:55 PM
Madame C "I'll never teeeellllll......."
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d0nchikit0 It's really good.. but I don't like the ex... May 26 2005, 07:00 PM
Madame C ^ Hm...I think I rather agree with you. Thanks fo... May 26 2005, 07:56 PM
stephinika carrie, this is amazing. i seriously love it. i ca... May 26 2005, 08:13 PM
electric shock That's really pretty! ohmygosh carrie... May 26 2005, 09:45 PM
sharerol ^ Lol Toby..that's sweet.
Anyway, I really,... May 26 2005, 10:33 PM
miss barnes omg thats really good. i've felt the same way ... May 27 2005, 06:58 PM
toodlepops. That's so awesome. and oh-so sweet. May 30 2005, 09:03 PM
RiddleMeWonders I could relate to this so well. You did an excelle... Jun 3 2005, 06:59 AM
Paradox of Life Wow, very very good. I bet a lot of people can rel... Jun 3 2005, 11:14 AM
ItzOnlySydney whoa. parts of it sound like a letter lol but i lo... Jun 4 2005, 01:45 AM![]() ![]() |