The Shower |
 May 25 2005, 02:04 PM
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As the pulsating beads of water Hit my bare skin All that has gone wrong today Seems to melt away My hands caress Every inch of my steamy body Slowly I begin to relax Everything will be allright Those 30 minutes Are priceless It is the one place that is mine My safe haven Each minute spent Feels like an eternity An eternity of happiness As my pain drips down the drain |
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May 28 2005, 03:43 AM
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^ haha that's what i was thinking.
good job. great imagery. and very relateable lol. |
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Rachel is love The Shower May 25 2005, 02:04 PM
xXirockhardXx I like it a lot. In a way to me its kinda true. Gr... May 25 2005, 09:19 PM danishcookiez Very nice, totally relatable. I just had a hot sh... May 26 2005, 08:58 PM william ...you take thirty minute showers ? May 28 2005, 12:52 AM
Rachel is love QUOTE(william @ May 27 2005, 10:52 PM)...you ... May 28 2005, 11:08 AM
mipadi QUOTE(xxcrazyjewxx @ May 28 2005, 12:08 PM)Of... Jun 8 2005, 01:43 PM d0nchikit0 QUOTE(william @ May 28 2005, 12:52 AM)...you ... May 29 2005, 08:19 PM mzkandi Nothing like a nice warm shower. I like it. May 28 2005, 08:14 AM miss barnes i take 30 minute showers too. i can clear my head ... May 29 2005, 07:30 PM sharerol Haha yeah. Long showers are relaxing. Nice poem,... May 29 2005, 09:00 PM Spiritual Winged Aura lmao, i love doing that ! .. my sister tells f... May 30 2005, 05:17 AM def_gn nice poem
lol yeah you tell yourself one more ... May 30 2005, 02:18 PM hollesther Nice poem great job! May 30 2005, 10:13 PM Paradox of Life Wow, that's really good. It's written real... Jun 8 2005, 08:06 PM xoxo_koala_kisses_ Rachel, dear, you just made me have dirty thoughts... Jun 10 2005, 02:48 PM |
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