Dreams Come True |
 May 24 2005, 09:07 PM
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| *stephinika* |
May 24 2005, 11:14 PM
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not bad. some of your vocabulary makes it less...i don't know...pretty? haha yeah i'm not too good with words either, but its not bad. the flow works pretty well - slightly awkward on some parts. keep up the good work.
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lidoxangie Dreams Come True May 24 2005, 09:07 PM
dispn0ygonekrazy wow i didnt know you'd write such good poems ... May 24 2005, 09:24 PM
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