go ahead read then criticize, tell me the truth. is it good or bad? Options

[Azn_Angel13]

hey pplz! here's mai poetry. idk if their good or not. i think their okay. mai friends tell me its good but i mean their mai friends. they don't wanna say nething mean to me. i think the first one is the best. so here's mai poems. go ahead read and tell me wat u think


What Is Done Is Done
If I could just take back what I just said
Turn back time and just revisit the past
Undo all the things I did, clear my head
Rethink everything slowly, not fast
The feeling of regret bothers me so
If only I could have another chance
But this is a thought that’s hard to let go
Wished I could have planned my life in advance
But the problem is, time can’t be reversed
Once it is done, it can never be changed
Let time be, let the human heart be nursed
Let all the good feelings be rearranged
The one thing I never wanted to do
Is to somehow be the one to hurt you


Love At First Sight
Oblivious of each other at first
The two never noticed one another
Did not know the feeling their heart thirst
Until the day when they met each other
Both never believed in love at first glance
Thought it only happened in fairy tales
Never had experienced true romance
Too afraid of getting too entailed
But as their eyes locked on to each others
They stood there, and held a never ending gaze
Knew right then, they had to be together
Until the end of their sad final days
Could this really be true love at first sight
Or just a dream made up at night?












Loving You
I can never ever felt this way before
I can not explain what I am feeling
This ache in my heart is hard to ignore
I just want to jump and touch the ceiling
Everytime I see your friendly face
My heart just stops, it just skips a beat
Think about it, I gaze into space
Having you with me makes my life complete
Your everything I want and would need
Your absolutely perfect for me
I want you more than ever yes indeed
Always together in eternity
I’m trying to say that I love you so
So much that you would never know

Lies
You’ll never know the damage that you have done
You’ll never see the tears that I cried
Never knew I’ll be hurt by my loved one
Even after the day that I had died
I was dumb, believed all the things you said
Realized they were lies, no truth behind them
I love you forever that’s wat u said
Lie deceit lies, I thought I was your gem
I gave you mai heart, showed you mai feelings
But you never treadted me the same way.
Just threw me out like potato peelings
I don’t care no more, don’t care what u say
Don’t care, u hurt me so much already
Wish we’ve never even gone steady

[dispn0ygonekrazy]

well first things first you poems are really good but just in my point of view the rhyme scheme seems a little off to me, and surely you can use or rearrange words so that it sticks to the topic of the poem, in some cases you seem to be jumping off and on on the subject but thats just me but anyways i like your first and last one i thought they were really good and catches alot of feelings ! good job