Asian Rant, performance poem... |
 Apr 17 2005, 12:07 PM
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 Change Gon Come  Group: Member Posts: 2,286 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 18,822  |
So i might use this poem for a poetry slam at my school..but i have to finish it first. So here's what i have so far:
Let me ask you What does it take For you to discriminate And race hate? Instead of trying to appreciate What I bring to this multicultural table Take time to learn from my multicultural fable You need to learn to respect Cuz I yearn for respect And I’m gonna earn that respect er... |
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May 21 2005, 10:27 PM
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 Bardic Nation Group: Member Posts: 1,113 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 38,059 |
sucks eh? that's fine. You're just one opinion in a million.
Yes, russia is big i critique to the best of my ability. you shouldnt take it so personally. It's not insulting your poem or you. It's telling you the weaknesses and things that you could possibly work on. you speak great english for an asian. That's really commendable. Or are you american? Have a nice day, no sarcasm intended. |
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DaToNeViEtBoI916 Asian Rant Apr 17 2005, 12:07 PM
wounded I like what you have. Asian's rock. :) Apr 17 2005, 12:12 PM imadorkabledxd i can't wait til u finish it! that reminds... May 14 2005, 10:31 AM toodlepops. Awesome so far, can't wait to see the final pi... May 17 2005, 01:48 AM ItzOnlySydney kewl. asians rock! May 20 2005, 03:55 AM sikdragon dont mean to sound like simon, but that was very b... May 20 2005, 01:42 PM DaToNeViEtBoI916 1. Russia is in Europe AND Asia.
2. It's an... May 20 2005, 08:10 PM Biblesterr743 the beginning was all cool, and exciting.. i know ... May 20 2005, 08:11 PM
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