Asian Rant, performance poem... |
 Apr 17 2005, 12:07 PM
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 Change Gon Come  Group: Member Posts: 2,286 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 18,822  |
So i might use this poem for a poetry slam at my school..but i have to finish it first. So here's what i have so far:
Let me ask you What does it take For you to discriminate And race hate? Instead of trying to appreciate What I bring to this multicultural table Take time to learn from my multicultural fable You need to learn to respect Cuz I yearn for respect And I’m gonna earn that respect er... |
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May 20 2005, 01:42 PM
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 Bardic Nation Group: Member Posts: 1,113 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 38,059 |
dont mean to sound like simon, but that was very bland and very boring. The concept is discriminating against the discriminators. It's sinking to their level. Definitely unfinished.
I have a question, when you say asians, do you mean orientals? I dont see very many people currently discriminating against russians. The red scare doesnt count. |
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DaToNeViEtBoI916 Asian Rant Apr 17 2005, 12:07 PM
wounded I like what you have. Asian's rock. :) Apr 17 2005, 12:12 PM imadorkabledxd i can't wait til u finish it! that reminds... May 14 2005, 10:31 AM toodlepops. Awesome so far, can't wait to see the final pi... May 17 2005, 01:48 AM ItzOnlySydney kewl. asians rock! May 20 2005, 03:55 AM DaToNeViEtBoI916 1. Russia is in Europe AND Asia.
2. It's an... May 20 2005, 08:10 PM Biblesterr743 the beginning was all cool, and exciting.. i know ... May 20 2005, 08:11 PM
sikdragon sucks eh? that's fine. You're just one opi... May 21 2005, 10:27 PM |
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