Ecstasy, No it's not about drugs |
 May 18 2005, 10:58 PM
Post
#1
|
|
|
Eternal Syn  Group: Member Posts: 398 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,000  |
Every day I reminisce
About the way I held you in my arms Close to my heart, close to me I held you with the highest regard You'll always be the one I treasure In my heart and soul; forever Whenever I sit down to relax I still remember the time When we stood out in the rain And kissed under the blanket of the sky These are the kind of memories That I keep within my heart These were the times when I Could be caught in the entangled web Of ecstasy called love An eternal high that can never fade As long as you're by my side And in my arms |
|
|
|
 |
Replies
|
May 19 2005, 11:35 PM
Post
#2
|
|
 durian Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 13,124 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,860 |
I love the metaphor "blanket of the sky" --- Immediately I thought of the light blue skies, with tiny puffballs of clouds.. ;D Yay hyperbole :D
The message delivered.. it's so simple, yet so powerful. I simply adore love poems. :] |
|
|
|
Posts in this topic
Cloud_X Ecstasy May 18 2005, 10:58 PM
xenosaga so lovey dovey May 19 2005, 11:38 PM stephinika very nicely done...i like it. very simple but gets... May 20 2005, 01:36 AM Cloud_X =D Thanks you guys...I appreciate the feedback. Ya... May 20 2005, 10:53 PM
dispn0ygonekrazy hahaha your saying ims tuck on that subject??? lol... May 21 2005, 12:44 AM |
1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
0 Members: