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Ill Miss You, ANOTHER LOVE POEM
dispn0ygonekrazy
post May 14 2005, 06:20 PM
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i walked away from you and left u to cry
i cant forgive myself for saying goodbye
im thinkin to myself how i did you wrong
ive been so lonely now that your gone
missing you so much i cant sleep at night
keep going back to that day when i held u tight
i knew from that moment it had to be true
your the girl i love, baby ill always love you
ill always remember your smile and your sweetest kiss
the girl who made me laugh, your the one i'll miss
if i could id rather be by your side
ill kiss away all the tears you've already cried
i know i cant be with you cuz things wont be the same
the only thing that keeps me alive, is living through your pain
 
 
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*stephinika*
post May 16 2005, 06:58 PM
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very sad, but very well written. great emotions. nice work. _smile.gif
 

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dispn0ygonekrazy   Ill Miss You   May 14 2005, 06:20 PM
lidoxangie   awwww thats so cute & sad . you're really ...   May 14 2005, 09:23 PM
x3__iGiVEup   wow, it has nice flow&rhyming. but i dont get ...   May 15 2005, 03:24 PM
iixSOOJINx   wow. if thats a true story, what made that person ...   May 15 2005, 04:12 PM
dispn0ygonekrazy   heh well that person is me lol   May 15 2005, 08:41 PM
yukichan   thats so sad... good job though...   May 15 2005, 10:37 PM
stephinika   very sad, but very well written. great emotions. n...   May 16 2005, 06:58 PM
toodlepops.   It has a wonderful flow. =)   May 17 2005, 01:49 AM
sheepy   really good but sad =[   May 25 2005, 07:12 PM
Insecure Emotions   its a beautiful poem..and im guessing..that you ha...   May 27 2005, 09:04 PM
dispn0ygonekrazy   hah thnx good to see your sticking around in the f...   May 27 2005, 10:11 PM
Insecure Emotions   haha.. my computer is great! thanks..   May 27 2005, 11:29 PM
[[AnGeLiC]]   Omg... That's a really good poem and it's ...   May 28 2005, 05:05 PM
Shattered_Hope   It's a sad but sweet poem, nice job.   May 28 2005, 06:37 PM
emazing   It's a very sad poem, but wonderfully written.   Jun 1 2005, 05:58 PM
ItzOnlySydney   awww sad poem =(. but beautifully written.   Jun 4 2005, 02:02 AM
T0rmented_Soul   More old Poems . I forgot I use ro write these thi...   Aug 4 2006, 01:50 AM
nightmare4taki   Haha I see you have So Sick in your sig, I was goi...   Aug 8 2006, 01:04 PM
T0rmented_Soul   Thanks KC, I use to think that too, but I don...   Aug 8 2006, 01:13 PM


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