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post May 4 2005, 11:49 PM
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I couldn't find a Poetry Contest either so I started one too.

PLEASE DON'T COMMENT ON POEMS HERE.

Poetry Contest

~Anyone can submit poems - up to two poems per person.

~There is no requirement for length and no required topic. Feel free to submit poems about whatever you want.

~Songs and raps don't belong here, I created a contest for songs/rap here.

Have fun and submit :)
 
 
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post May 11 2005, 10:57 PM
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A stroll across a bridge.

The calming power of a careless, lazy stroll across an antique wooden bridge is quite overlooked,
As the gray hue of a broken, wandering man's eye converges with the gray hue of the underlying broken, wandering water, a heart's palputations settle.
The work-induced ravines on the hands of a struggling, working man meet the weather-torn patterns on the wooden railing,
It's as if the only instrument necessary to inflict harmony on the nerves of a shaky human being is a combination of gray hues, and tranquil quiet.
The irony of the situation is evident; both to the observer, and to the man leaning on the railing,
After this near supernatural connection between inanimate and living, there comes the tumult of reality.
It's what some refer to as the enigmatic 'calm before the storm',
It's what many might see as the poor man's 'escape from his cell'.
It's piano-worthy; symphony-worthy; the moment of emotional catharsis achieved by a gloomy afternoon stroll across a creek,
But the nirvana evades the inflicted; the moment, despite our wishes, cannot last eternal.
With the swift sweep of that patterned hand on a grimy brow, and the realization that the tranquility has passed,
The man, rather, the soul heads back into the torturous cell it so desperately needed exile from:

The torturous cell of daily life.
 

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x LUV x ALWAYS x   Poetry Contest   May 4 2005, 11:49 PM
xXYouMeBedNowXx   If I'm correct, poetry has very limitation, so...   May 5 2005, 01:49 AM
wickedcurse   i posted thi poem once here... HER sitting here...   May 5 2005, 01:55 AM
sikdragon   i dont need this. double posting my foot.   May 5 2005, 07:59 AM
x LUV x ALWAYS x   QUOTE(sikdragon @ May 5 2005, 8:59 AM)i dont ...   May 6 2005, 08:18 PM
sikdragon   forget it then   May 5 2005, 07:59 AM
x LUV x ALWAYS x   please don't double post, thanks! and tha...   May 5 2005, 03:12 PM
RiddleMeWonders   Lee's Glance (Revised Version) Why is it when...   May 5 2005, 04:20 PM
nightmare4taki   EDIT Wrong spot srry.   May 5 2005, 06:26 PM
Frankie   TOPIC PINNED   May 6 2005, 08:19 PM
not_your_average   Help My heart, it cries, With a troubling need, F...   May 6 2005, 09:27 PM
sikdragon   This Document Contains No Data just havent been p...   May 6 2005, 10:19 PM
racoons > you   GAME OVER cant i learn... two feet firm on nothin...   May 7 2005, 08:46 AM
Rachel is love   Untitled. I still remember the first day we met. I...   May 8 2005, 10:46 AM
RiddleMeWonders   Oh what the hell.. I'll post this one too. I’...   May 8 2005, 06:35 PM
WinterNights2   The Rose that grew from the concrete Observe the ...   May 11 2005, 07:05 PM
xtransatlanticismx   asphalt sea recollections of skidded knees of dod...   May 11 2005, 09:11 PM
CrackedRearView   A stroll across a bridge. The calming power of a ...   May 11 2005, 10:57 PM
lidoxangie   two plus two doesnt always equal four theres mor...   May 12 2005, 07:59 PM
DaToNeViEtBoI916   My Water Gun By Phuc Le I’m gonna squirt you wit...   May 12 2005, 08:11 PM
sikdragon   still the thirteenth. It's friday, the fear o...   May 13 2005, 03:25 PM
x LUV x ALWAYS x   Yeah today's the last day, any last entries? ...   May 13 2005, 05:35 PM
chinesekimchi   This is was a writing prompt from my teacher. ...   May 13 2005, 09:30 PM
chinesekimchi   oh I`m sry!! For "I shouldn...   May 13 2005, 09:33 PM
yaamakoh   In the essence of beauty The emotion of pleasure O...   May 13 2005, 11:48 PM
x LUV x ALWAYS x   Contest ended. I'll accept the submissions t...   May 14 2005, 07:47 AM
Just_Dream   Contest Closed.   May 14 2005, 02:33 PM


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