listen to my plea . |
listen to my plea . |
May 3 2005, 05:12 PM
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close my eyes
and count to three . listen to my only plea shield me from their wicked lies . help me finally see & let me realize, that you're the one for me . protect me from the rain of never-ending tears . make me forget about my pain, erase away all my fears . help me to stay sane, because as it appears, my love for you, i cannot feign . you've always been here, all these years . how could i have been so blind ? to shun you the way i did . lets leave all those memories behind . into the backs of our minds, where they should be hid . please accept my apology, thanks for listening to my plea . i hope that you'll forgive me , i hope that you too will see . it took me long to realize too, but in the end, i know that i'm still in love with you . |
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May 10 2005, 06:22 PM
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![]() ticktock. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 1,138 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 118,235 |
i like it! especially the way it rhymes =)
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lidoxangie listen to my plea . May 3 2005, 05:12 PM
stephinika not bad. it rhymes and flows pretty well and you g... May 3 2005, 10:39 PM
not_your_average wow... that sounds like something i would write... May 10 2005, 07:22 PM
toodlepops. Excellent, I can really feel it. =) May 13 2005, 09:40 PM
imadorkabledxd whoa...i liked it. the rhyming was goodQ!! May 14 2005, 10:25 AM![]() ![]() |