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ok...

finally done

[jacksparrowsgirl...]

alright then, here goes....hope this helps u for future pieces.....anyway, i agree with you about the hair, but seeing as how you explained that its the program, we can let that slide for now. I think there should be more definition, more value ranges, for the fingers and toes just to define them a bit more. I REALLY REALLY love the top half of the pants(the part with the light hitting it) that part is super great, makes me want to eat it....jk not really, but thats how good it is...didnt know how else to explain it lol. the bottom halves of her pants look a bit odd...i think it may be the same problem as the hair, because of the program u used. anyway, dont worry bout that cuz thats a minor nitpicky thing. Umm....ok on to the next thing. The skin values are pretty good for the most part, but i dont exactly love the hue you chose for the skin. It looks a little bit TOO white and when u have all those nice warm colors in the rest of the piece it gets a little drowned out. Ok....i took a stab at critiquing ur piece.....lemme know if i helped u out at all! Thats what im here for

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alright then, here goes....hope this helps u for future pieces.....anyway, i agree with you about the hair, but seeing as how you explained that its the program, we can let that slide for now. I think there should be more definition, more value ranges, for the fingers and toes just to define them a bit more. I REALLY REALLY love the top half of the pants(the part with the light hitting it) that part is super great, makes me want to eat it....jk not really, but thats how good it is...didnt know how else to explain it lol. the bottom halves of her pants look a bit odd...i think it may be the same problem as the hair, because of the program u used. anyway, dont worry bout that cuz thats a minor nitpicky thing. Umm....ok on to the next thing. The skin values are pretty good for the most part, but i dont exactly love the hue you chose for the skin. It looks a little bit TOO white and when u have all those nice warm colors in the rest of the piece it gets a little drowned out. Ok....i took a stab at critiquing ur piece.....lemme know if i helped u out at all! Thats what im here for

ok nevermind, i actually dont want criticism.

reason being,... this peice actually means a lot to me and many of the things that you mentioned were done deliberately because this is a personal peice of art. maybe it's just you and the way you're saying it, but i really can't take your criticism seriously. it's probably just something with me, but i dont take criticism well when it comes from someone who is not up to par with me (and it's just a little conceited.. i know); i've seen your work and lets just say we have different... tastes.

but... thanks for trying, i guess.