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 Apr 23 2005, 01:46 PM
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im writing a poem on graduating for school... any ideas?
this is what i have so far The time has come for us to say goodbye, the end is near, of junior high. Tears fill our eyes as we all embrace, hoping mascara won’t run down my face. |
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May 9 2005, 06:29 AM
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QUOTE(sw33t babii x33 @ Apr 24 2005, 2:46 AM) im writing a poem on graduating for school... any ideas? this is what i have so far The time has come for us to say goodbye, the end is near, of junior high. Tears fill our eyes as we all embrace, hoping mascara won’t run down my face.  i'm not sure but i'm thinking in the line that hoping mascara won’t run down my face you should change the my to an our. |
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sw33t babii x33 graduation Apr 23 2005, 01:46 PM
Frankie interest > writing
i think it is good. but it ... Apr 23 2005, 03:33 PM iheartsimba I think I'll move this to HW bc she's like... Apr 23 2005, 03:35 PM Shattered_Hope It's nice so far.
Some ideas would be to writ... Apr 23 2005, 04:30 PM angel_revelation that's good write about all the cool things ... Apr 23 2005, 11:03 PM imadorkabledxd hahah ai like the mascara part Apr 25 2005, 01:09 PM DaToNeViEtBoI916 really though, too serious for junior high.
i rec... May 1 2005, 06:18 PM jooleeah What a nice poem Though, I agree, it is a bit dra... May 1 2005, 06:47 PM surfhottieoffcoast running and screaming down the isle
i hope i do no... May 4 2005, 07:55 PM xoxvietbabyy Talk about your favorite memories of the year? Lik... May 11 2005, 09:19 PM xxpimpjuice1227x hey.. its like mee 2 . but im volunteered for spee... May 12 2005, 07:34 PM frannay xD yeah, kinda dramatic.. and probably dont try anyth... May 15 2005, 12:54 PM emazing (= That's a good start right there! I gues... May 22 2005, 10:57 PM
bogalgirl its so good i can never write anything like tha... May 27 2005, 03:20 AM |
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