Song/Rapwriting contest, ends Friday, 5/13 Options

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I'm not sure if we have something like this already but I couldn't find anything so I'm making this topic... (If there's a contest already feel free to close this topic.)

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Song/Rapwriting Contest

~Anyone is free to submit a song or a rap...a maximum of two per person, please.

~Don't submit any very short verses or the like - if you're going to submit something, make sure that, in total, it is at least 10 lines.

~I'll choose a winner...runner up...and third place.

Have fun everyone!

[WinterNights2]

The good die young....
Jose was only 4 when he died
i was the only person who could stand the pain, i never cried
please, you don't know we all die slowly on the inside
but we still look like were normal on the outside
planes been killin people while they been falling
distressed familys contacting each other constant calling
tower gone down due to terrorism, witnessed it collapsing
we all argued amongst ourselves while the times been passing
can we say who dies or breathes?
Stop for a momment, and calm down to see
i pray for the dead, god bless the dead
young souldja your time has come rest ya head
i'll see you one day soon when we all go to the gates
love to all the fallen brothers we'll all have intertwined fates
people given less, bless the poor
they born with less, but they live for more
they get no help but they hold they're own
the struggles noticed, but never really known
to all the young people who never got to see an older age
in the storybook of life, just another blank page
the young who never got to graduate from school
whatever we we do we can't bring them back
while the bad live still dealin crack
corruptin our lives, hoods and communitys
all this shit goin on we've developed a shell, an immunity
Everyone feels the pain and the shock
young soldjas die over pointless violence wastin glocks
we got a world filled with children filled with terror
with everyone dying my own death seems nearer
little children starvin, never able to accomplish their dreams
pointless arguments, blood boiling screams
this is dedicated to anyone who died young
rest in peace young soldja thuggin in heaven relaxin under the sun
your in a better place now, rest in peace
your names engraved on the tombstone immortalized by concrete
enjoy what's left of your life once your gone your just a memory
Don't worry im feelin this pain it shakes me constantly.

Yeah this is dedicated to everyone who ever died over violence
Don't complain and say i wrote too much about the world.