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Poetry Contest, ends 5/13
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post May 4 2005, 11:49 PM
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I couldn't find a Poetry Contest either so I started one too.

PLEASE DON'T COMMENT ON POEMS HERE.

Poetry Contest

~Anyone can submit poems - up to two poems per person.

~There is no requirement for length and no required topic. Feel free to submit poems about whatever you want.

~Songs and raps don't belong here, I created a contest for songs/rap here.

Have fun and submit :)
 
 
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post May 5 2005, 01:49 AM
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If I'm correct, poetry has very limitation, so I suppose.

Momentum of an Emotion
Today, I have discovered true happiness. 9:39 this evening. In Art Class. One of my long life obstructions is the fact that I am sometimes unable to express my emotion. To be unable to put feelings onto paper, onto canvas, into words, simply because the feeling is too great, and to attempt to is to do so in vain. The beauty of it. Oh, the beauty of it. Who would of known? To find pure, untainted, happiness in the eyes of a thing that I go on day to night and night to day? The sight so great, so awesome. A tune was playing, from the movie "The Sound of Music". A good friend of mine, singing, dancing to it. Another lazily laughing at her unorthodox sibling in a bliss of sweet breath. My very own sister too, absorbing the emotion in its raw, unfaltered form. My instructor, too absorbed in it. And a friend, oh, the friend. The one person I hold in the much most highest respect for, in a way that is so...so...unbelievable. It is not a romance. No, it couldn't. But the same level of feeling, in the sense of good. And to know all of this, to witness all of it. To know one thing that can make everything so in too much context and to so much sucked into itself. Absorbed, felt, to the deepest crevices of my heart, mind, and soul: that it will not last. This feeling, this great happiness this joy of monolithic proportions, of an infinite amount can, no --- will, be lost. Why? WHY? Why must it? To feel in such great amounts that so much has been given and then it must be taken, ripped from my body? To feel so much happiness, and because of it, fed to sorrow. Yes, today is the day where I found true happiness, and yet too found the deepest level of my sorrow. Learn this, and learn this well: Your life, my life, everyone's, take control, live it, take chances and do everything you can to give yourself that paramount; because you must -- this is your only shot.
 

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x LUV x ALWAYS x   Poetry Contest   May 4 2005, 11:49 PM
xXYouMeBedNowXx   If I'm correct, poetry has very limitation, so...   May 5 2005, 01:49 AM
wickedcurse   i posted thi poem once here... HER sitting here...   May 5 2005, 01:55 AM
sikdragon   i dont need this. double posting my foot.   May 5 2005, 07:59 AM
x LUV x ALWAYS x   QUOTE(sikdragon @ May 5 2005, 8:59 AM)i dont ...   May 6 2005, 08:18 PM
sikdragon   forget it then   May 5 2005, 07:59 AM
x LUV x ALWAYS x   please don't double post, thanks! and tha...   May 5 2005, 03:12 PM
RiddleMeWonders   Lee's Glance (Revised Version) Why is it when...   May 5 2005, 04:20 PM
nightmare4taki   EDIT Wrong spot srry.   May 5 2005, 06:26 PM
Frankie   TOPIC PINNED   May 6 2005, 08:19 PM
not_your_average   Help My heart, it cries, With a troubling need, F...   May 6 2005, 09:27 PM
sikdragon   This Document Contains No Data just havent been p...   May 6 2005, 10:19 PM
racoons > you   GAME OVER cant i learn... two feet firm on nothin...   May 7 2005, 08:46 AM
Rachel is love   Untitled. I still remember the first day we met. I...   May 8 2005, 10:46 AM
RiddleMeWonders   Oh what the hell.. I'll post this one too. I’...   May 8 2005, 06:35 PM
WinterNights2   The Rose that grew from the concrete Observe the ...   May 11 2005, 07:05 PM
xtransatlanticismx   asphalt sea recollections of skidded knees of dod...   May 11 2005, 09:11 PM
CrackedRearView   A stroll across a bridge. The calming power of a ...   May 11 2005, 10:57 PM
lidoxangie   two plus two doesnt always equal four theres mor...   May 12 2005, 07:59 PM
DaToNeViEtBoI916   My Water Gun By Phuc Le I’m gonna squirt you wit...   May 12 2005, 08:11 PM
sikdragon   still the thirteenth. It's friday, the fear o...   May 13 2005, 03:25 PM
x LUV x ALWAYS x   Yeah today's the last day, any last entries? ...   May 13 2005, 05:35 PM
chinesekimchi   This is was a writing prompt from my teacher. ...   May 13 2005, 09:30 PM
chinesekimchi   oh I`m sry!! For "I shouldn...   May 13 2005, 09:33 PM
yaamakoh   In the essence of beauty The emotion of pleasure O...   May 13 2005, 11:48 PM
x LUV x ALWAYS x   Contest ended. I'll accept the submissions t...   May 14 2005, 07:47 AM
Just_Dream   Contest Closed.   May 14 2005, 02:33 PM


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